Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Yes, that fur does look like curly carpet. Good job, Bill. The picture is strange, but in a good way. Good job with alliteration of 'c' and 'b'. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018

Thank you, Jan

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is just a darling 5-7-5 poem you have penned about the dainty looking Poodle all decked out in pink. You used very cute words and very adorable picture. I enjoyed this very much! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018

Thanks, Teri

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Bill, it's just too sweet to look at. How could you not fall in love with this little creature. it's really unfair to look that cute, so all you want is to take it back home. Great little poem. All best.Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018

Thanks, Ulla.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Mais oui, my Fifi. You are so beautiful, your curly hair makes me think of a welcoming rung that I just want to curl up on. This is a beautiful animal. It is in fact not suited for just any owner. A dog like this is best suited with an owner who can afford to care for her properly.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018

I think she?ll be cross-eyed looking at that bow all day.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Isn't she adorable? But she's screaming "High maintenance." I'd hate to see her bills from her stylist. Sorry, but I don't think I could afford her. Excellent word choices and rhyme. Carpet hair is a great description. Your 5-7-5 is in order, as if ready for a contest. judi

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018

I think you wash her in cold water and tumble dry.

reply by judiverse on 13-Sep-2018

I'm glad they provide instructions for poodles. judi

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi Bill. Why did you not enter this in one of the 5-7-5 contests? My stepmother collected poodles. One of them looked just like the poodle in your image. Her name was Tanwen. All of them had Scottish names. Good job. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018

Thanks, Pam. Tired of losing to Michael.

reply by Pamusart on 12-Sep-2018

Lol. I have never gotten honorable mention for a contest. I think Tom does not like me

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

And, as they say, cute as a button! :) Guess the bow is better than having a target there, huh? Lol! :) ;) Another great edition - thanx for sharing,

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018

Ain't she cute? I understand they don't shed either.

Comment from damommy

Excellent

What a pretty little girl. Sweet little face, but her eyes look sad. Maybe her bow is too tight. 'Curly carpet hair' is a very good description. I love that color.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018

Thanks, da

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Um. No. I'm not kissing that "wet carpet." I know where animal noses go and they don't wash their noses either - not that I've seen. Cute dog picture and poem. But not kissing it.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018

Thanks, lyenochka. No nose kissing required.

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

An accurate description, this carpet comparison. I never used to like poodles but in my old age, I can't resist any breed of canine. This one is pretty cute.

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 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018

Thank you, FB, for taking a look. Bill