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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Good job on this poem, Bill. I enjoyed reading it. I like the alliteration of 'c' and the rhyme poodle/canoodle. The picture is a nice pairing, too. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
    Thanks, Jan
Comment from frogbook
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Great rhyming and alliteration as well as a clever poem/caption of these two furry friends. You even brought their home country into the mix!

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018


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    Thanks, FB
Comment from damommy
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Poodles kanoodle. hahaha.

High maintenance dogs, these are. I always feel sorry for them in that ridiculous haircut, but I understand why it was done originally.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018


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    Thanks, da
Comment from nomi338
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Ah yes, Boris and Boom Boom. I knew them well, we used to stroll the streets of Paree, searching for thrills and the occasional smile from some flirtatious fillies. Those days are sadly gone now and I sit here at the home and am consoled by the faded photo memories of yesteryear when everything was one fun filled adventure after another.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018
    You?ll always have Paris. :)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Fun 5-7-5 to start the poodle collection -- they even look like they are quite excited about their debut! :) :) Thanx for sharing the beginnings of another set of smiles with all of us! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018


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    Thanks, Yvette
Comment from judiverse
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Preparing for the dog show, no doubt. Great pairing of poodle and kanoodle. Fun alliteration. We associate poodles with the French, so placing them in Paree is very natural. I like the color of the poodles in the picture, and I think they look charming without the poodle cuts. Don't forget about the poodle skirts that were popular back when. judi

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018


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    Thanks, Judi.
reply by judiverse on 12-Sep-2018
    You're welcome. judi
Comment from Teri7
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Bill, This is a very cute poem about the poodles kanoodling. You used very cute and very good words with a really neat picture of those poodles. My sister had a little while poodle she named Cuddles. Very cute job! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018
    Thanks, Teri