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2018 Bernie and Howie Stories

Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Looking for some companionship"
...stories and poems about the boys

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Comment from jenintorre
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I hope the little doggie finds his female partner. He looks very cute in the photo but has it been airbrushed. A very cute poem. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2018

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Comment from Boogienights
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I absolutely love this. I've read quite a few of them they are all so cute. I liked the part about locking his annoying little brother in the closet...what a great idea! Wish I had thought of that when I was younger. Best wishes in the contest.

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Comment from mackenzietastan
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This is a very funny ad. It was the right balance of human enough to sound like a personal ad, but obviously written by a dog. The pooping in the car part had me rolling.

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Comment from KyColonel Randal
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Thank you for sharing. I especially like the part about the annoying little brother. I could stand to be more tolerant of my aging, blind, incessantly barking Shih-Tzu. I think the picture you have chosen to illustrate your poem is very appropriate. Good luck with this contest entry!

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Comment from Monica L. Moraca
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Adorable and funny too! I always wonder what our pets really think of us. If they could talk, boy I am sure they would tell stories that would outdo stories told by humans! :)
Great job and best of luck in the contest!
Monica

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Comment from Ann Marie Anglin
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This is very cute and entertaining. And I love the picture of the little guy trying to look engaging. I wrote a bizarre little story years ago called "Dog Thoughts" that was a bit on the rude side, but fun all the same. Now I'm curious about where I put it.... I enjoyed your poem very much and look forward to reading more of your work. Kind regards, Ann Marie

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Comment from Hugh McDowell
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Excellent. This reads like an entry from a dog dating service site. Love it. This heartfelt plea would surely attract a number of lady dogs. I like how he references his owners in a, oh, by the way fashion. Very cute. Great picture. Hugh

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Comment from trailblazer101
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Have to give it five for the last sentence stanza or whatever you want to call it.
Would have to do something about the jobs in the car though before I'll bite

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