2018 Bernie and Howie Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Looking for some companionship"...stories and poems about the boys
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Comment from LeftHandedScribe
What a lovely little gem this is! Such a sweet and melancholy tale of the longing to find the right partner and connect. I love how you get this message across in the vessel of a dog--so warm and wonderful!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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What a lovely little gem this is! Such a sweet and melancholy tale of the longing to find the right partner and connect. I love how you get this message across in the vessel of a dog--so warm and wonderful!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
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Comment from Cindy McIntyre
This is really cute and funny. I am enjoying this doggie personal ad. I love the doggie's feelings about the poop and the brother. :) Good luck in the contest. You have one sweet little dog.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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This is really cute and funny. I am enjoying this doggie personal ad. I love the doggie's feelings about the poop and the brother. :) Good luck in the contest. You have one sweet little dog.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
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Comment from mermaids
This is an interesting little dog, he is clear about his poop and little brother. Excellent use of words that is humorous and makes the reader laugh. I wish you well in the contest.
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This is an interesting little dog, he is clear about his poop and little brother. Excellent use of words that is humorous and makes the reader laugh. I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
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Comment from heart of Lou
Pretty good, even if you had to make a poem out of it. Of course the male dog needs his female companion to blame stuff on! like pooing where he's not supposed to. Bad doggie! He better get a spayed one since he doesn't seem to like kids!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Pretty good, even if you had to make a poem out of it. Of course the male dog needs his female companion to blame stuff on! like pooing where he's not supposed to. Bad doggie! He better get a spayed one since he doesn't seem to like kids!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
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Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
lol, This is so cute, I love I like to go on long walks, lol. I love this entire piece.
I do recognize this little furry friend, lol. I don't think his brother will be to happy if he reads this ad about putting him in the closet. lol Good luck! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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lol, This is so cute, I love I like to go on long walks, lol. I love this entire piece.
I do recognize this little furry friend, lol. I don't think his brother will be to happy if he reads this ad about putting him in the closet. lol Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Thank you, Kerry :)
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You're very welcome. Sorry for the late reply:) Enjoy your weekend.
Comment from Pantygynt
Yes I can see it might have worked better in prose as the poetic aspects are somewhat dogged (sorry about that one) by technical faults regarding rhythm and rhyme but we won't dwell on that. The poop thing is another matter, and any bitch (spayed or not) responding to this needs to have sinus trouble resulting in a loss of any sense of smell. This client is not a bad little chap really, even if he does show fratricidal tendences.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Yes I can see it might have worked better in prose as the poetic aspects are somewhat dogged (sorry about that one) by technical faults regarding rhythm and rhyme but we won't dwell on that. The poop thing is another matter, and any bitch (spayed or not) responding to this needs to have sinus trouble resulting in a loss of any sense of smell. This client is not a bad little chap really, even if he does show fratricidal tendences.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This plea to find a mate is endearing and that dogs face is so cute! I loved your advertisement and I hope the dog finds a companion soon, he he he, a joy to read, love Dolly x
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This plea to find a mate is endearing and that dogs face is so cute! I loved your advertisement and I hope the dog finds a companion soon, he he he, a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
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Comment from zlp22
Great poem. Good luck in the contest. Word flow makes it an interesting and easy read. Cute dog. I hope you find what you are looking for. Good color brings out the letters.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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Great poem. Good luck in the contest. Word flow makes it an interesting and easy read. Cute dog. I hope you find what you are looking for. Good color brings out the letters.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2018
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written advertisement for doggy to find a play mate. He is honest about his shortcomings so there will be no surprises when we get to know him better.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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A very well-written advertisement for doggy to find a play mate. He is honest about his shortcomings so there will be no surprises when we get to know him better.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2018
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Comment from A Fractal Heart
What a cute poem! Made me laugh; my dog ALSO poops in the car when she gets to excited and she is MUCH bigger than the pup in the picture! :-) Well done!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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What a cute poem! Made me laugh; my dog ALSO poops in the car when she gets to excited and she is MUCH bigger than the pup in the picture! :-) Well done!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2018
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