Funny Honey
Viewing comments for Chapter 71 "See Ya Later Alligator. "A Witty Ditty Anthology
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Comment from LeftHandedScribe
Well, this made me laugh so thank you! Clever and mischievous. There's an element of surprise and terror yet the funny is never lost. Nice use of your questions as well.
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Well, this made me laugh so thank you! Clever and mischievous. There's an element of surprise and terror yet the funny is never lost. Nice use of your questions as well.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2018
Comment from phill doran
Hi Rhonnie
Very funny - but you need a quick edit as you ran with your stick so quick you forgot to mention it on the end line!
Keep it up - some days you make me 'groan'- but that's good too!
I wish you well with your writing
cheers
phill
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Hi Rhonnie
Very funny - but you need a quick edit as you ran with your stick so quick you forgot to mention it on the end line!
Keep it up - some days you make me 'groan'- but that's good too!
I wish you well with your writing
cheers
phill
Comment Written 02-Sep-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever writ Rhonnie and the poor writer has been got by the sounds of it! No sooner the question is out and the answer didn't quite make it! Ingenious, love Dolly x
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A clever writ Rhonnie and the poor writer has been got by the sounds of it! No sooner the question is out and the answer didn't quite make it! Ingenious, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Sep-2018
