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Viewing comments for Chapter 82 "Filthy Rich."
"ALL IN THE FAMILY."
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Comment from
LeftHandedScribe
How many times do we pass the broken and the needy and turn away? Too many I would say. This poem is wrought with great truth and insight. The photo is heartbreaking.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2018
Comment from
Sugarray77
Your depiction of the anguish your character is walking through when they realize their only importance to the people around is the relationship with Dad. I'm sure that would also create a father/child strain as well. Good descriptive words and situations to support your theme.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2018
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