God's Love
God loves man the most. God's Love Poetry Contest69 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
You met the challenge of the contest using all four words. And YES! God does love us, His creation every day even when we can't see it and even when we feel "unhappy." Good job! Glad you can post your poems now.
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You met the challenge of the contest using all four words. And YES! God does love us, His creation every day even when we can't see it and even when we feel "unhappy." Good job! Glad you can post your poems now.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is so very true, my friend. When we are disturbed or unhappy, it really does help to remember that God does love us. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
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This is so very true, my friend. When we are disturbed or unhappy, it really does help to remember that God does love us. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
Comment from nancyrabbrose
The message I got from your small poem is that since God loves all the animals and they are happy, why can't I be happy all the time as well. I love the simplicity of your message. Beautiful illustration.
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The message I got from your small poem is that since God loves all the animals and they are happy, why can't I be happy all the time as well. I love the simplicity of your message. Beautiful illustration.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO ALCREATOR LITT DEAR: I like your posting here because it brings me to my Holy Bible at: MATTHEW chapter 10: verses 28 through 31. And LUKE chapter 12: verses 6&7.
Our God's eye is on the sparrow. So I know His eye is on me. In the book of PSALMS, chapter 100 at verses 2 through 5, I've learned why it is important for me, that I never be unhappy. Today is the day that our Lord has made. I will rejoice and be glad today in spite of any and all outside negative circumstances. Because, "Our Lord is my shepherd. His rod and His staff...they comfort me. And He loves you too, Alcreator. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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HELLO ALCREATOR LITT DEAR: I like your posting here because it brings me to my Holy Bible at: MATTHEW chapter 10: verses 28 through 31. And LUKE chapter 12: verses 6&7.
Our God's eye is on the sparrow. So I know His eye is on me. In the book of PSALMS, chapter 100 at verses 2 through 5, I've learned why it is important for me, that I never be unhappy. Today is the day that our Lord has made. I will rejoice and be glad today in spite of any and all outside negative circumstances. Because, "Our Lord is my shepherd. His rod and His staff...they comfort me. And He loves you too, Alcreator. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
Comment from Jacqueline O.
Considering the constraints of the prompt, this is a solid piece of writing. The thought was conveyed well and it provided strong imagery. It was a quick and satisfying read.
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Considering the constraints of the prompt, this is a solid piece of writing. The thought was conveyed well and it provided strong imagery. It was a quick and satisfying read.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Well you got the words in, Alcreator. If humans could be like animals, the world would be a much better place. They go about their business, not liking or disliking anyone or thing. They just live their lives and are happy. We are a miserable lot by comparison. But, God loves us anyway. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
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Well you got the words in, Alcreator. If humans could be like animals, the world would be a much better place. They go about their business, not liking or disliking anyone or thing. They just live their lives and are happy. We are a miserable lot by comparison. But, God loves us anyway. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
Comment from Nanny 6
You used the required words well in this free style poem. Its lighthearted and fun, leaving one feeling fresh and joyful after reading... it's simplicity is rewarding because I enjoyed going back and re reading it a few times, for a good smile. : )
Judy
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You used the required words well in this free style poem. Its lighthearted and fun, leaving one feeling fresh and joyful after reading... it's simplicity is rewarding because I enjoyed going back and re reading it a few times, for a good smile. : )
Judy
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
Comment from TKField
Methinks you've done again, what languageless animals could not on a whim. God is good and terrible. Why can't he write his way clear? He's so far in he can't get out. KnowwhatI'msayin? God loves to make man suffer, that's why he got to scribble this collection of letters. I think, therefore, I am, I think....Free Floating Flatulence.
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Methinks you've done again, what languageless animals could not on a whim. God is good and terrible. Why can't he write his way clear? He's so far in he can't get out. KnowwhatI'msayin? God loves to make man suffer, that's why he got to scribble this collection of letters. I think, therefore, I am, I think....Free Floating Flatulence.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a remarkable use of the contest words! Certainly the most unique and direct entry - great job!:) ;)
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
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What a remarkable use of the contest words! Certainly the most unique and direct entry - great job!:) ;)
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2018
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Alcreator: good use of the words. Me thinks I'm unhappy is
an interesting phrase. God loves his children. Notice how
animals love to be close to us. We can enjoy their company, too.
Enjoy your weekend. flylikeaneagle
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Alcreator: good use of the words. Me thinks I'm unhappy is
an interesting phrase. God loves his children. Notice how
animals love to be close to us. We can enjoy their company, too.
Enjoy your weekend. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 18-Aug-2018
