Comment from Skywatcher707

Excellent

Well my goodness. I was not prepared for the punchline at all. Error free as far as I can see (about 18 inches to my screen) ð??? Drinking and driving is serious business that can ruin lives permanently but if your light hearted piece draws attention to that then more power to it.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2018

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello Rhonnie, love those author notes, they're nearly a short sharp poem on their own. This is engaging and well written with a fresh voice, I liked it, and saw no errors, a definite recommend, especially as it is a good work for putting people off drinking and driving.

Thanks for sharing it, cheers, Ana.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018

HI THERE, ANASTASIA: Thank you for your helpful and encouraging review. Most jokes are what I call. "Folk Jokes." They are passed from folks to folks. This one however, came from an incident that really happened. It was sooooo funny to me. However it didn't tickle the judge's fancy. So...the joker, (not me) got himself incarcerated. LOL. Cordially: rhonnie69. P.S. The names have been changed to protect the guilty.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent this one would have done very well in a humor poem contest, I like the names of the characters you have selected for this work, very well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018

HI THERE, KAHPOT: Thank you for your helpful and encouraging review. Believe it or not, this joke came from an incident that really happened. It was sooooo funny to me. However the judge got bent out of shape, and missed out on the humor in the matter. Consequently, the joker, (not me) got himself incarcerated. "Hee Hee." Cordially: rhonnie69.