Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Zanya, this is a great chapter and so very well written. Why don't you promote this? You would get so many more reviews, and suggestions which it so much deserve. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018

HI Ulla thanks for that - historical fiction is such a minority interest , I think! hard to tell sometimes what works ! zanya

reply by Ulla on 05-Aug-2018

Do you know, if you don't put it out there, you'll never know. Go for it; Ulla:)))

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello, this has a great ending with the Bible verse. I also enjoyed the detail of the wedding and the retro picture with the bride is gorgeous. I think that era was very elegant. I noticed no errors. Your writing is easy to read and nothing jarred.

I found it a very entertaining read. One of my four sister's English name is Mathilde, it means battle maiden and does that description fit!! She is beautiful and we're besties, but don't mess with her, LOL.

Cheers, Ana.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018

Thanks for such encouraging words - yes turning back the pages of time can be interesting but I think it has a limited audience appeal zanya

Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was a well penned chapter. It had a great reading flow and that slight hint of suspense to keep the reader reading. You did very well on the history of all characters, including the heckler that Lady Mathilda ignored because of her husbands request. I enjoyed the details you provided. I will have to go back and read some of the previous ones. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018

Thanks for the encouragment zanya

reply by aryr on 19-Aug-2018

You are very welcome.