Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi Ricky. This is different. Well written and uplifting. I have some comments below. Thank you for sharing

""Dew breaks as the Many is awakens... ". Awkward unless you remove the s from awakens.

I really like this part

""Tulips and Daffodils frolic in the breeze as Dandelions multiply with just one sneeze!""

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018

Thanks Pamusart.
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Comment from diamondbogle

Excellent

I love this. Its pleasant to read. Very well put together and flows nicely. I noticed no errors. Held my attention throughtout. Overall very well done.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018

Thanks diamondbogie.
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Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Excellent

I love this poem it is so refreshing and is like a bear coming out of hibernation after a long winter's rest. An Awakening to a beautiful bring season the words are just so exuberating and makes you look forward to the season of spring thank you for sharing. Makes me want to get my fishing pole LOL

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018

Thanks Mary I appreciate this.
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Comment from kahpot

Excellent

What a wonderful read on the coming and changing of seasons, as nature provides us with the many different sounds of life with each change, very well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018

Thanks and glad you enjoyed this one kahpot.
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Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Thank you Dr. Ricky for a very beautiful and well written verse extolling the charms of springtime. Your poem flowed beautifully and had a soft smooth cadence. Good job.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018

Thanks Sugarray.
Glad you enjoyed this.
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Comment from LeftHandedScribe

Good

Your artwork is so striking and powerful. This is a lovely piece of writing. Some of the line breaks could be broken differently. I think it would create more of an impact. I feel the writing is solid. It's just a question of where you break up each thought for flow.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018

Thanks Shauna for your review and comments.
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Comment from karenina

Excellent

Whitman's "Leaves of Grass" possessed me one fine summer in my youth. I found a lovely leather bound volume of it in a Salvation Army store and spent hours daily throughout one adolescent summer learning the beauty of poetry and immersing myself in the eloquence of that fine poet. Your poem transported me back to the magic of nature and verse and transformation!

Karenina

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018

Why Thanks so very much Katerina!
Ricky...

reply by karenina on 25-Jul-2018

You are SO welcome!