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The Book of Fine Poetry

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Comment from meeshu
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this is quite a journey you have taken us on and in really fine verse. you deserve a sojourn here at FanStory. keep o keeping on, Ricky...........meeshu

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
    Thanks again Miss meeshu?
    Kind words from a beautiful Poet.
    Ricky...
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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Why all the question marks? The lines are statements, not questions. I guess you had a lot of them laying around and had to use them or lose them. Send me some.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
    25 cents each.
    Or, 5 for da Dollar.
    Are your questions Thomas Bowling, Pertinent and Worthy of My Treatments?"
    Dr. Ricky 1024?????
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks about death and time for death, when the time is due there is death and life is the most precious gift, the dying son speaks his father about his time for death, so he leaves, the message is clear; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
    Thanks for your quick response AlCreator.
    Ricky