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Baby Barbie

Is it a tongue twister?

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Comment from Betsy2
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I like it, and it made me laugh. Well done. And, I think there's even
an undercurrent of a political statement there - ha. The picture is cute, and
I certainly remember how much my daughter loved playing with her Barbies too.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
    This was a fun write. Yes, there is a political statement within, you got it. Thank you for reading.

    Blessings,
    Brigitte
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
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So you have managed to both create a delicious tongue twister and tell a little something about its history. I am an actor, and as I said this out loud, I can assure you that it would warm up the loosest of lips. Clever, fun and vibrant!

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
    I am honored to receive this praising review from someone who has the ability to perform in the art of speaking. I appreciate your time to read and the lovely comments. This was a fun write inspired by watching my little granddaughter play with Barbie.
    Thank you again.
    Have a wonderful day!
    Anon
Comment from Dean Kuch
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What will the Mattel Toy Company think of next?
They'll be putting grilles on Ken's teeth before long--if they haven't done so already.
I used to collect the Barbie-sized G.I. Joe action figures as a kid. They came with cloth uniforms, weapons, fighting gear--the whole enchilada.
They just don't make toys the way they used to.
Good luck in the tongue twisters contest.
~Dean

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
    Do you know that they make a Barbie that actually has a baby? Unbelievable. Glad you enjoyed G.I. Joe, my boys did too.
    Barbie has survived decades but sure has bigger "you know what" now, lol.
    Thanks for reading and sharing.
    Anon
reply by Dean Kuch on 24-Jul-2018
    I'm sure you meant bigger brains, heh-heh.
    You're very welcome.
    ~Dean ;)
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
    Absolutely, brains,lol.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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Body bling! What will they think of next. I was never allowed to have a barbie, mom didn't like them and they didn't have the money. This is for sure a tongue twister. I had a terrible time reading it. =} Well done and good luck with the contest. Rox

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
    I agree with your Mom, Barbies are not the best influence on little ones. They have lasted over decades and we bear with them. can you believe that they actually have one that gives birth? Won't buy that one for sure. Thank you for reading and your nice review.
    Have a blessed day!
    Anon
Comment from nancyjam
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Great tongue twister - the alliteration works well here.
Barbie is quite a phenomenon - she has lasted a long time
and keeps up with the trends of fashion.
Not sure she's a good example for the little ones, but that's
just me!
Nancy

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
    I agree with you about Barbie maybe not being a good example for little ones. They now have Barbies that give birth, can you believe it? No, will not buy that one. They still fascinate girls after all of these years. Thank you for reading and the kind comments.
    Have a great evening.
    Anon
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice image.
-It's amazing what they'll do
to make things more commercial
and tempting for kids!
-You definitely have a good
tongue twister about Barbie and her bling!
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
    Thank you for reading. This was a fun write and loved the picture from FanArt. Hope you tried it out,it's hard.
    I appreciate your time.

    Anon
reply by Pam (respa) on 23-Jul-2018
    You are very welcome and thanks for sharing about Fan Art.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
    This was fun.

    Anon
reply by Pam (respa) on 23-Jul-2018
    It's always good to enjoy what you write.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
    Awww, thank you. I am honored.

    Anon
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi there,

Okay, so I tried to say your words three times fast, and I couldn't even get through two times. Great use of the 'B' alliteration to form your tongue twister. Good luck to you in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
    Thank you reading this tongue twister. It was fun to write and I loved the picture from Fan Art.

    Mystery writer
Comment from Emily George
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It certainly is a tongue twister, bbb. I really like the beautiful image that suits the work perfectly. Short and sweet with good alliteration. I wish you all the best of luck in this contest

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
    This was a fun entry for the contest. My granddaughter loves her Barbies. Thank you for reading.

    Mystery writer
Comment from Shanbreen
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I like this tongue twister but I find it hard to reconcile with what you are trying to state. At first reading, it made me wonder why would a benevolent Barbie buy something like that for "giving to others". But perhaps, that's not what you meant. Perhaps Barbie is a turncoat or has two personalities. But I like the effort at such a long twister.


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018
    Yes, I see why you may have wondered. The truth is Barbies have changed and she is being kind to buy this "bling: for her friends. They now have Barbies that give birth, can you believe it? Thanks for reading and the comments.
    Have a great day!
    Brigitte
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

You did a great job with this tongue-twister. I can barely even say it slowly. lol These are more difficult than people think.

nice job
GMG

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018
    This was a lot of fun to write. I have never tried this before but may do it again, it was a challenge for sue. Thank you for your compliments.
    Have a great Sunday!
    Brigitte