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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Exceptional
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This speaks how a bereaved father thinks; after death his son Jason left for good the sky the blue infinite, father tries to touch him but reason death, wounded target took him away; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR (6-STAR)

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
    Thanks again for your wonderful review and time Al Creator.
    Doc R.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent
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What a beautiful story about a life and giving after death and that we can keep on giving well after we are gone, very well done and blessings to you and yours****kahpot

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
    And thanks for your wonderful review kahpot.
    Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from karenina
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MY faith sustains me. I believe all of those I have lost are in the Heavenly Father's arms...and while I wish to stick around and watch my grandchildren grow and thrive, I know it is only by God's will each of us is graced with today. I fear the pain of dying but I do not fear death...it will be a joyous reunion I think!

Karenina

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
    And thanks again for your wonderful review and time Karenina.
    Ricky....
reply by karenina on 15-Jul-2018
    Gpd Bless my friend.... You are most welcome!