Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi Ricky. I will not ask you any more about Jason. My poor brother had six sisters and no brothers until the last two kids came along. Both boys. Girls tend to be caretakers more so than boys. I did notice one glitch I think. Thank you for sharing

""She was always there with my from age two to three!" ". Did you mean "with me"?

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018

Thanks Pam
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about new life and gives an account of daughters and sons and about their growth and establishment, the ultimate gift, family and whereabouts; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018

Thanks again Alcreator for your Review!
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Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Dr Ricky what a most cool poem in celebration of your new family. They can't help but enjoy this upbeat and heartfelt dedication to the joy of them.

terrific job with a terrific poem.

one little typo My thoughts on the Ulimate (Ultimate) Gift.

Good writing here.

Gloria

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018

Thanks Gloria and Part Number Two was just added.
Ricky...