Comment from kahpot

Excellent

What an amazing picture and you have definitely found the right words to convey its message an excellent 5-7-5 poem, very well written I like the way it ends "rub each other right usually it is the opposite****kahpot

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018

Thanks, kahpot

Comment from SarahPenn1

Excellent

Hello!

Haha! A light and humorous piece
Great use of alliteration in the first and second lines
I like the last line and the double r's

Good luck with the contest!

-S

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018

Thanks, Mad

Comment from pbomar1115

Excellent

It's amazing how species of a different animal get along without speaking the same language. When I first saw this kind of smooching and told animal get alone only with their own, I wondered. I still do today.

Phillip

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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018

Thanks, Phillip.

reply by pbomar1115 on 10-Jul-2018

You're welcome, Bill.

Phillip

Comment from Hugh McDowell

Excellent

Excellent work. I love the personality of this poem. Reinforced by the great picture. This is such a feel good poem. Nice when words make the world a better place. Awesome photo. Hugh

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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018

Thanks, Hugh