Deer Heaven
A doe and her son flee to greener pastures18 total reviews
Comment from Pantygynt
You have room in a poem of this lengths to really get to grips with the problem. i jhave just finished writing ahead enough tanka poetry to keep my posings up whren I am away on vacation and took as my theme the effects of mankind's interaction with the natural world, so we are in agreement on this one.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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You have room in a poem of this lengths to really get to grips with the problem. i jhave just finished writing ahead enough tanka poetry to keep my posings up whren I am away on vacation and took as my theme the effects of mankind's interaction with the natural world, so we are in agreement on this one.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Hi Jim. Much of my painting and writing covers this Thanks for the nice review
Comment from royowen
There's so many places in the world this is happening, whether it's environmental encroachment or its climate change, there's so many things going on in this most unfortunate world. Very touching narrative encased in smooth metric rhyming stanzas, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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There's so many places in the world this is happening, whether it's environmental encroachment or its climate change, there's so many things going on in this most unfortunate world. Very touching narrative encased in smooth metric rhyming stanzas, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Thank you Roy for such a nice review
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My pleasure Pam
Comment from TPAC
You got my vote. This write in my opinion pounding in expressive conveyance, finding one sway in its course flow: The farmer living off this field has planted here for higher yield. Just my opinion. Great story.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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You got my vote. This write in my opinion pounding in expressive conveyance, finding one sway in its course flow: The farmer living off this field has planted here for higher yield. Just my opinion. Great story.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Thank you TPACfor a lovely review and especially for the sixth star
Comment from Ulla
Hi Pam, what a wonderful poem that goes with your lovely painting. Your poem is beautiful and tells such a lovely story of a mother deer and her son's struggle to survive. It was so sad in places but had a happy ending. Wonderful rhythm and imagery as well. I liked it a lot. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Hi Pam, what a wonderful poem that goes with your lovely painting. Your poem is beautiful and tells such a lovely story of a mother deer and her son's struggle to survive. It was so sad in places but had a happy ending. Wonderful rhythm and imagery as well. I liked it a lot. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Thank you Ulla very much for this wonderful review
Comment from jenintorre
Pam, my friend, were you a deer in your former life?
This is an absolutely delightful poem. I enjoyed reading it very much.
I am very impressed with the amount of poems that you post. Do you just write non stop
or are some of the poems previously written? Take care Jen.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Pam, my friend, were you a deer in your former life?
This is an absolutely delightful poem. I enjoyed reading it very much.
I am very impressed with the amount of poems that you post. Do you just write non stop
or are some of the poems previously written? Take care Jen.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Hi Jen. These days I am weiring two per day. Takes about six hours. I ran out of old ones. Thank you for asking. And thanks for the lovely review
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem expressing the thoughts of a deer and her fawn finds a green field with juicy leaves the closest thing to be in deer heaven. What more can a deer ask for?
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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A very well-written poem expressing the thoughts of a deer and her fawn finds a green field with juicy leaves the closest thing to be in deer heaven. What more can a deer ask for?
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Thank you Sandra for a great review. Nice to see you tonight. Hope all is well
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Pam Pam, Deer Heaven such a creative idea for such gentle creatures. They way you describe the deer lifesyle and how the mother nutures and protect her young is so compassionate. And the desription of the chariot ride is breathtaking.
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Pam Pam, Deer Heaven such a creative idea for such gentle creatures. They way you describe the deer lifesyle and how the mother nutures and protect her young is so compassionate. And the desription of the chariot ride is breathtaking.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Mary. You are oh so kind to me. Thank you so much
Do you
mind if I ask you about religion from time to time? I am explorimg. Take care
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Sure Ill share what I know of my faith. But you Pam have a general idea. I enjoyed the poem the Joly Boy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Deer are always hunted by man for their meat and of course it is not necessary today as we have more than enough food to eat. I liked your take on 'deer heaven', great rhymes, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Deer are always hunted by man for their meat and of course it is not necessary today as we have more than enough food to eat. I liked your take on 'deer heaven', great rhymes, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Thank you Dolly for your wonderful review. Have a great day. Two am here. Need to sleep.
