Deer Heaven
A doe and her son flee to greener pastures18 total reviews
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
This one is so very touching. I love looking out at our farm. I live on five acres and down a fairly quiet gravel road. Deer LOVE living here. We see so many every night. They are beautiful to watch. Your words are tough to read, although I know the hardships wildlife endure.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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This one is so very touching. I love looking out at our farm. I live on five acres and down a fairly quiet gravel road. Deer LOVE living here. We see so many every night. They are beautiful to watch. Your words are tough to read, although I know the hardships wildlife endure.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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Hi Cindy. Sounds wonderful where you live. I enjoy seeing deer also. Thanks for the for the great review
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Beautiful! I sit in the morning and watch them in my backyard. We live in a small resort community and there is no hunting within here, so we have a bit of a population! They do eat all my flowers, so I've stopped planting those, but I LOVE the deer. You did a fantastic job with this piece and I loved every bit of it, the topic, the rhythm, the flow, the art choice. Great job and Keep Writing!
Wendy
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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Beautiful! I sit in the morning and watch them in my backyard. We live in a small resort community and there is no hunting within here, so we have a bit of a population! They do eat all my flowers, so I've stopped planting those, but I LOVE the deer. You did a fantastic job with this piece and I loved every bit of it, the topic, the rhythm, the flow, the art choice. Great job and Keep Writing!
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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Thank you Wendy for a wonderful review Thank you especially for the sixth star. I really appreciate it
Comment from lyenochka
The deer don't have to wait for Heaven - they live here and eat in everyone's yards plus shooting is not allowed. So deer have the run of the place. I like your painting!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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The deer don't have to wait for Heaven - they live here and eat in everyone's yards plus shooting is not allowed. So deer have the run of the place. I like your painting!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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Are you a closet deer hater? Lol. You may have them there. Sounds like a wonderful place to live. Thanks for the charming review. Teehee
Comment from Artasylum
Pam beautifully written but nerve racking that there is no hope. Looking at that great watercolor seems so sweet and then reading your words about their fate. thanks so much. yours, diana
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Pam beautifully written but nerve racking that there is no hope. Looking at that great watercolor seems so sweet and then reading your words about their fate. thanks so much. yours, diana
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Hi Diana. It is oils but that does not matter. Thank you for your kind comments. Thank you for the great review
Comment from meeshu
a very good write here Pam. you sure wouldn't know the deer are in short supply where I live. they are almost domesticated. it's great to live with them here, except they bring the big cats.................meeshu
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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a very good write here Pam. you sure wouldn't know the deer are in short supply where I live. they are almost domesticated. it's great to live with them here, except they bring the big cats.................meeshu
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Well you must have a lot of nature where you are. Sounds nice. Thanks meeshu for your great review
Comment from Air Spirit
Absolutely, I agree with you 150%. Your poem was a beautiful rendition of a story of a mother and baby who are literally fighting for their lives... not just from predators, but the biggest 'threat' of them all - MAN! I get so very upset by how we encroach upon animals land, take away their homes, take away their food supply, for some shallow and superficial 'need' that cement-city-people say is crucial for their survival - yeah right! I have been really upset lately, because these new people who will be moving in across the street, are ripping out TWO FULL AND MATURE trees... one is a beautiful pine tree, the other not so sure... but the idiot who bought this house (next to a mountain mind you), wants to 'kill' and pull out these trees, because he has 'allergies' --- never mind the fact, that he will take away a home to the white owl who lives in it, and sings to us almost nightly, or how plants/trees help Mother Earth to 'cool off' and they help replenish the very air we breath -- but God forbid he has to put up with a stuffy nose -- I made numerous calls to several different agencies and animal advocacy groups, but to no avail... so, this poem hits close to home... and it is so upsetting.. and not one other person I have talked to, wants these trees removed... Arghhh! Anyway, sorry for the rant --- but you started it!!!! :)
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Absolutely, I agree with you 150%. Your poem was a beautiful rendition of a story of a mother and baby who are literally fighting for their lives... not just from predators, but the biggest 'threat' of them all - MAN! I get so very upset by how we encroach upon animals land, take away their homes, take away their food supply, for some shallow and superficial 'need' that cement-city-people say is crucial for their survival - yeah right! I have been really upset lately, because these new people who will be moving in across the street, are ripping out TWO FULL AND MATURE trees... one is a beautiful pine tree, the other not so sure... but the idiot who bought this house (next to a mountain mind you), wants to 'kill' and pull out these trees, because he has 'allergies' --- never mind the fact, that he will take away a home to the white owl who lives in it, and sings to us almost nightly, or how plants/trees help Mother Earth to 'cool off' and they help replenish the very air we breath -- but God forbid he has to put up with a stuffy nose -- I made numerous calls to several different agencies and animal advocacy groups, but to no avail... so, this poem hits close to home... and it is so upsetting.. and not one other person I have talked to, wants these trees removed... Arghhh! Anyway, sorry for the rant --- but you started it!!!! :)
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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I agree with you a hundred percent Cynthia. Thanks for the spirited review. Take care
Comment from Gloria ....
I just love this painting, Pam. You've really captured the "essence" of the deer.
So true that humans are invading animals habitats which is causing them to come into ours too. A sad story and a true story and a truly delightful poem, Pam.
Gloria
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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I just love this painting, Pam. You've really captured the "essence" of the deer.
So true that humans are invading animals habitats which is causing them to come into ours too. A sad story and a true story and a truly delightful poem, Pam.
Gloria
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Thank you Gloria for your nice review and kind words
Comment from kahpot
Well what an absolutely amazing poem, from birth to heaven for a little deer, this is a wonderful poem it reads and flows very well and tells a whole life story, my congratulations to you on this one****kahpot
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Well what an absolutely amazing poem, from birth to heaven for a little deer, this is a wonderful poem it reads and flows very well and tells a whole life story, my congratulations to you on this one****kahpot
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Thank you kahpot my friend for this nice review. Thanks for the six stars. It means a lot to me. Take care
Comment from damommy
You've told us a beautiful story about survival in a well written poem. Good rhyme and meter. Flowed right along when reading.
I agree that we've infringed too much on their territory, and they're the ones who pay for it. Doesn't seem fair.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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You've told us a beautiful story about survival in a well written poem. Good rhyme and meter. Flowed right along when reading.
I agree that we've infringed too much on their territory, and they're the ones who pay for it. Doesn't seem fair.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Thank you damommy for this great review
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Pamusart
Your poem about the fawn and his mother reminds me of the book Bambi which was very emotional when I myself was a child
Now to read your thoughts from the painting was the same Love how you ended knowing that the fan and his mother-
they both just bask within the light
They ride a chariot of gold
and time has stopped; they don't grow old
The sun now shines from deep within
It drops to earth; new day begins
Gert
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Hello Pamusart
Your poem about the fawn and his mother reminds me of the book Bambi which was very emotional when I myself was a child
Now to read your thoughts from the painting was the same Love how you ended knowing that the fan and his mother-
they both just bask within the light
They ride a chariot of gold
and time has stopped; they don't grow old
The sun now shines from deep within
It drops to earth; new day begins
Gert
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Thank you Gert. I had the doe in
The poem but not the painting. I did the painting first. Thanks for the great review
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You are welcome Pamusart smiles so you are an artist
Gert
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You are welcome Jan
Gert
