"The Gift of Life II"
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Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Well Ricky in this Valley of dolls that you written about everyone seems to have some issues as we all do but let me point out that as you get close to bottom of this piece right before the 2003 you have a d instead of an s for should be as you have ad. Anyway as I was saying in this Valley of dolls we all probably fall into that Valley with one issue or another. The artwork that you chose is very appropriate for the writing. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Well Ricky in this Valley of dolls that you written about everyone seems to have some issues as we all do but let me point out that as you get close to bottom of this piece right before the 2003 you have a d instead of an s for should be as you have ad. Anyway as I was saying in this Valley of dolls we all probably fall into that Valley with one issue or another. The artwork that you chose is very appropriate for the writing. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Thanks again for your wonderful review and time Mary!
And have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.Thanks and sorry for the Impact it had.
Catch my latest 'Slivers of Ice!'About my first trip to He'll.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
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It was an interesting read. Please don't forget to read my new poem ask your daddy golden comes up for it on tomorrow
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Gotcha.
Ricky
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Thanks Rick
Comment from meeshu
a room full of patients as a room full of dolls, an intriguing metaphor, DR. Rick. all in need, all at the mercy of others, yet each with a very different story. well penned...............meeshu
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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a room full of patients as a room full of dolls, an intriguing metaphor, DR. Rick. all in need, all at the mercy of others, yet each with a very different story. well penned...............meeshu
Comment Written 01-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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Thanks meeshu for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from kahpot
Excellent and a beautiful read and poem, I love reading when the person delivering the words are thinking of others a very well written poem with consideration****kahpot
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Excellent and a beautiful read and poem, I love reading when the person delivering the words are thinking of others a very well written poem with consideration****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Consideration?
Helping?
Sharing?
All, Lost Connections in a World that forgot How to Be?
Thanks for this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from Gloria ....
So good Dr Ricky. Organ donation brings life to others and likening it to dolls in waiting in Oz is an apt allusion.
I certainly hope it makes a difference and people follow the advice of your poem.
My pleasure to review.
Gloria
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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So good Dr Ricky. Organ donation brings life to others and likening it to dolls in waiting in Oz is an apt allusion.
I certainly hope it makes a difference and people follow the advice of your poem.
My pleasure to review.
Gloria
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Glad that this one was noticed and enjoyable by you Gloria.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from Janilou
I was a little confused at first, but it all came together by the end of the poem. Good idea to include the link for organ donation.
My, 'Gift of Life', will probably come (to) late!"
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That's the only spelling correction needed that I found.
All the very best.
Jan
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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I was a little confused at first, but it all came together by the end of the poem. Good idea to include the link for organ donation.
My, 'Gift of Life', will probably come (to) late!"
too
That's the only spelling correction needed that I found.
All the very best.
Jan
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thanks Jan for not punishing my Grammar
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
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You're welcome. I've come to the conclusion that it's nigh impossible to edit ones own work. I can go over my writing fifteen times and still miss the most obvious errors!
Comment from karenina
I will continue to remind you Jason is not missing--he has passed to a peaceful heaven where he awaits you in God's choice of time. On his way from this world he left behind life giving organs to sustain the life of more than one person. This is not the fate you wanted for him. To be sure it is not the fate he would have chosen for himself...but it is not for us to understand, in the here and now, God's great plan for us all. Keep the faith and keep writing. IN doing so you help yourself and you honor Jason.
Karenina
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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I will continue to remind you Jason is not missing--he has passed to a peaceful heaven where he awaits you in God's choice of time. On his way from this world he left behind life giving organs to sustain the life of more than one person. This is not the fate you wanted for him. To be sure it is not the fate he would have chosen for himself...but it is not for us to understand, in the here and now, God's great plan for us all. Keep the faith and keep writing. IN doing so you help yourself and you honor Jason.
Karenina
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Most of my work is done to bring attention to my work.
Whether Spiritual or Other.
I try to mix it. With,Straight Poetry and additions to My books but Jason seems to get 'First Call!'
Thanks for you kind thoughts.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from ElegantButler
Because of your son's kindness and generosity, another family was spared the pain that yours has suffered.
My mother was an organ donor, but when the time came, they said she was too old. To my family it was like they'd slapped her in the face on her deathbed. It had meant so much to her.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Because of your son's kindness and generosity, another family was spared the pain that yours has suffered.
My mother was an organ donor, but when the time came, they said she was too old. To my family it was like they'd slapped her in the face on her deathbed. It had meant so much to her.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Sorry about that.
My friend is too old for a Kidney and he wouldn't be on Dyalisis if...
They offered him a Kidney from a man who died and had Aids!
Thanks,
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about visiting a fantasy land of dolls where father waits for return of his son and cannot return without a son but had to; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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This speaks about visiting a fantasy land of dolls where father waits for return of his son and cannot return without a son but had to; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thanks again for your wonderful review and time Al Creator.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today.
