Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Teri, Greyson looks very happy to be in Man Maw and Pap Paps pool...he is getting sooooo big...I miss my grandkids when they were little...I miss my kids when they were little...LOL...I love your poem my sweet wonderful friend...and your picture is priceless...very nicely written...love you much...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018

Thank you so much for the great review. That was his mommy and daddy's pool they get in at times together. lots of love, Teri

reply by l.raven on 10-Jul-2018

your so welcome sweet girl...today I could have used it...love you lots as well...Linda xxoo

Comment from kaymart

Excellent

Cute picture!
He looks so happy; having a good time, is he? *smiles*
The photo is sideways, but I can still see the joy he's exuding.
Such aa cute picture!

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thank you for the very good review and comments. Sorry about the picture! love, Teri

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

What a cute picture of a fun time Greyson is having. Great way to beat the summer heat, too. Good job, Teri, on the 575. Your words + picture are a nice pairing. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018

Thank you so much Jan for the excellent review and comments. I miss him. He comes home late today and we lave at 3 in the afternoon tomorrow! love, Teri

Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Excellent

Hi Teri,

Pool time is so much fun for kids (and adults too)! Such a relief on a hot day.
Thanks for sharing! Greyson looks to be enjoying himself.

Hugs,
Connie

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018

Thanks so much Connie for the excellent review and very nice comments! love, Teri

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

No matter the size of the pool, a child should be watched carefully. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018

Thank you Charlie for the great review and very good/true comments. We do watch him very carefully! Blessings, Teri

reply by c_lucas on 30-Jun-2018

You're welcome, Teri.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

hi Teri
Greyson looks so cute in his little swimming pool and how lucky he is to be able to go into the big pool with him Mom and Dad
Gert

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018

Thank you Gert for the very good review and very lovely comments. He does love the water! love, Teri

Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

He looks like he's having the time of his life, and I really wish I could jump in the pool with him! (It's a bake oven here today and I have no shade to park in.) Greyson is adorable as always, and I hope he's having fun right now!

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018

Thank you so much Brenda for the lovely review and comments. It is miserable with the heat here too. Greyson, with mommy and daddy are in San Diego, CA where on or our twins life. We are headed there on Monday for 8 days. Our twins turned 30 today. The heat is really not a good combination with MS, but I don't know of anyone sick or well that enjoys blustering heat! Try to stay cool my friend! love, Teri

reply by brenda faye curtis on 30-Jun-2018

I will have a tall glass of tea and think of you! Stay well, my friend. :)

Comment from sandy montgomery

Excellent

Oh my stars what a cutie. I remember the days of plastic pools and giggles in my own front yard. Enjoy this. They outgrow them WAY too fast. Thank you for sharing your grandson and his pool time fun.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018

Thank you so much Sandy for the very nice review and comments. Believe it or not, I run across some pictures of our own sons in their pool when they were this age. Brought back so many memories! love, Teri

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 5-7-5 poem and a beautiful picture of Greyson in his little pool. They enjoy the little pool in summer and it is safer than to let them swim in the big pool alone.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018

Thank you so much Sandra for the very nice review and comments. I agree with you as we do watch him very closely around water with us! love, Teri

Comment from Yemima Kebede1

Excellent

This is such a nice poem. Thank you for sharing this. I really like how you described a summer day. Keep up the great work! Great job on being a top ranked author and an accomplished poet. Well done!

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018

Thank you so much for the very nice review and comments about a day with Greyson and his pool! blessings, Teri