Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

Oh no, the puppies are very worried about their mistress. She is going to be grumpy without her coffee and Howie knows just what to do. Hide!. This is very cute, loved it. I do hope you can quickly get passed the no coffee stage. I know it is really tough, I'll be praying for you, Love, Rox

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018

Hi, Rox,
Thank you so much for your kind review. If I can get past the headache stage of this, I will be fine.

~patty~

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

So they did all they were equipped to do, RUN FOR COVER! LOL
This was a fun story Patty. I do enjoy your stories about the dogs.
I didn't catch any nits or spags. Well done my friend. Nancy

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018

Hi, Nancy,

Thank you so much for the R&R. Yup, the boys knew just to stay out of my way. They are still in bed - and it's after 1 PM!!

~patty~

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Oh my goodness -- how totally delightful!!! And I can so see a number of the canines I know conspiring and being "insightful" enough to actually live out what you have here!!

Thank you so very much for sharing!

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018

Hi there,

Thank you so much for the R&R. I write about Howie and Bernie often. Their stories can be seen on veterinarian's websites all over the country. I'm glad you enjoyed this story of theirs,

~patty~

Comment from Angela Hayes

Excellent

Good read,

check few mistakes... 1. second line after the picture- could this be, what was wrong?, 2. no comma (all) and- between ottoman and 3.> try removing some and< e.g. repeated...(don't need and?).

well presented, well balanced, good story line, easy to read, image to match.

Good Luck!

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018

thank you for the review.

I looked at those few sentences and made some changes.

This wasn't a contest entry, but. I appreciate your well wishes.

reply by Angela Hayes on 26-Jun-2018

That's ok, i also appreciate it on mine, because eventually i will be publishing them, so rating will be logged too, so that's my goal. Feel free to check mine out. :)

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I agree with the dogs, disaster could be coming. LOL I enjoyed reading your cute post. I know I don't speak to my husband before he's had his coffee.

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 Comment Written 26-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018

Hi, Barbara,

The boys did well to hide this morning. I feel horrible! Thanks so much for reading,

~patty~

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Howie and Bernie story. It isxanazing how quickly they can know something is different and sometimes they can figure out the situation and remember the consequences of the past very well..

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 Comment Written 26-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018

Hi, Sandra,

Thank you so much. The poor babies do realize I'm not quite myself,

~patty~