Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job with your poem about your son, Ricky. You expressed your thoughts/feelings well. I enjoyed your perspective of your life & that of your son. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018

And thanks for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.

Comment from Monica L. Moraca

Exceptional

What a beautiful poem. It made me cry. Thank you for sharing such a heartfelt story...it made me realize I should not take life for granted and embrace what I have and love those who share my life because in an instant they can be gone.

Monica

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018

Words so true Monica.
Each day we should thank God for another day on his beautiful Heaven.
Dr Ricky 1024.

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

As usual. Heartfelt and hard hitting. I have been going through a few things I would non-pleasurable latest, yet, I always feel the emotions in your write, and as usual would wish you solace.
My very best.
RGstar

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018

Sorry to hear that RG.
Hope this helps a bit and thanks.
Dr Ricky 1024.

Comment from nancyrabbrose

Excellent

First, I am so sorry for your loss. You have written a beautiful tribute to your dear son, Jay. I like the way you capitalized some words that ordinarily are not capitalized. I like "the hands turn so fast as yesterday becomes a long ago past". Well done.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018

Thanks Nancy I believe we halve never met?
Ricky...
I will Friend Request thee...

reply by nancyrabbrose on 23-Jun-2018

no, we have not "met". thank you for your interest. It is great to "know" someone online who loves to write and has a gentle heart

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I love photo you choose to go with your poem
I know this was not easy to write at first ad I was for me to read Them a smile came across my face that your son give another person life
Thank you for sharing
Cookie

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018

Thanks again for your wonderful review and time cookie.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

reply by misscookie on 24-Jun-2018

It was my pleasure, have a nice Sunday
Cookie

Comment from ElegantButler

Excellent

Though the body is gone, the heart beats on. And the soul upon flight passes through those closest to it leaving a tender trace upon your own soul.

I applaud your courage of heart in writing. I am sure there were times when you had a hard time seeing what you were writing because of tears.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018

Thanks Elegant
Butler for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about love, fate, fortune, existence, life and death and the poet now wishes to know more his only son died but gifted things to this earth; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018

And thanks for your wonderful review and time Al Creator.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

Comment from TPAC

Excellent

Warm caring emotions with touching sentiment deposited, love wrapped in words that expound their given feelings. Good read in my opinion with many delighting aspects.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018

And thanks for your wonderful review and time TPAC.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

He was so young Ricky. This made me weep for the hole in your heart. I can't imagine. I've known two people who lost small kids. One from SIDS and the three year old choked an a walnut shell from a walnut he'd snuck into bed. I am so sorry. My thoughts are with you. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018

Sorry to hear that and thanks from the bottom of my heart.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

this very personal free verse through free thought. a streaming consciousness writing that takes on some deep feelings and issues. well written, Ricky...........meeshu

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018

Thanks meeshu from the bottom of my broken heart ...
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today