Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Great job in creating a poem almost entirely of R words. Perhaps you could even change the "On" to "Re: " and then it would be all R words. Just an idea. Fun poem!

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018

Nice idea.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

What an excellent 5-7-5 poem all words but one starting with "R" a very masterful write, I know there is a syllable count for these poems, so I will just ask would RE: roadrunner rut, have meant and been the same, I am still learning this form of poetry, very well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018

Yes. I see that the name is used as a compound for the bird and apart for the car.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a great 575 with awesome use of alliteration of 'r'. I enjoyed reading it Bill. The picture is a perfect pairing of your well chosen words, too. Good job on the syllable count per line. Thanks for sharing. Jan

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 Comment Written 14-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018

Thanks, Jan

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello Bill, that doesn't look like a very good road to run down. I liked the poem, and like all of your works, it is quite clever and witty. You suggest a lot with a few well-chosen words, and the sentiment is apparent, a lot of people are running flat out down the wrong road, LOL.

No suggestions for improvement and thanks for this work, it was a fun read I'd recommend to other readers for review, Ana.

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 Comment Written 14-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018

Thanks, Ana