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"ALL IN THE FAMILY."
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RFL
Excellent, Rhonnie! You captured me instantly and I kept on reading. You made me simile. The use of dialect is great and infuses your story with reality. And, thank you for putting us 'girls' on a pedestal. Best wishes, Rona
Comment Written 01-Jun-2018
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Alexander Vasa
Hello Rhonnie, this is fun and witty, I liked the subject matter and some of your observations are golden:
"A philosopher is a cool calm unemotional person,
when they're challenged by burdensome conditions." ahahahahaha
I think you've written this very well. Have you formatted your writing this way for a reason? It makes no difference and is a work I'd recommend to other readers for review, and thanks for sharing it, ANa.
Comment Written 31-May-2018
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