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2018 Bernie and Howie Stories

Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Bernie wants a bath"
...stories and poems about the boys

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Well of course. Bernie is a smart little dog. I enjoyed your story Patty. I always have liked these for the POV from the dogs. That is what makes these stories. I can tell you really love your dogs, too. What a fun story. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 30-May-2018


reply by the author on 31-May-2018
    Hi, Jan;

    Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed Bernie's latest adventure. He is still preening after his bath; one would think he just got out of an expensive salon,

    ~patty~
Comment from Teri7
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lol lol This is just too cute and adorable. That is the cutest picture of Bernie! He is such a cute little guy. You told the story so well. I could see Bernie wanting this bath so bad and Howie standing by so quietly waiting. What a cute, true story!. Thanks for sharing! love, Teri

 Comment Written 30-May-2018


reply by the author on 31-May-2018
    Hi, Teri;

    Bernie and Howie certainly keep me entertained. This was a fun story to write - especially since Bernie gave me the material,

    ~patty~
Comment from MelB
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I was wondering what he was rolling in. There are worse things! What they won't do to get our attention! An enjoyable read, Patty.

 Comment Written 30-May-2018


reply by the author on 30-May-2018
    Hi, Melissa;

    Thank you for reading Bernie's story,

    patty
Comment from damommy
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He has your number, doesn't he? He's a smart boy. He knows how to get your attention. lol. I had to laugh that Howie just watched, knowing there was going to be trouble. 8 -)

Such a cute story. I always love to hear about Bernie and Howie. My cats have me figured out, too. Maybe they're smarter than we are. hahaha


 Comment Written 30-May-2018


reply by the author on 30-May-2018
    Hi, Yvonne;

    Yes, Howie sits back and watches the havoc Bernie creates. Of course, he is always there for the treats.

    Bernie is so happy to smell good that he doesn't want to go outside.

    Thank you for reading,

    patty
Comment from Mistydawn
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Lol. I love your Bernie and Howie stories they're so cute and your dogs POV is what you'd imagine they'd be thinking. My guys like to play in the muddy creek, hunt for turtles. It's well-written, very interesting a fun little read. Thank you for sharing.

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reply by the author on 30-May-2018
    Hi there;

    Thank you for the R&R. I'm glad you enjoyed Bernie's latest story.
Comment from Sasha
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I enjoyed this one immensely. What a precious and fun story about a clever dog who knows how to manipulate his owner and get the bath he so desperately wants. I got a real kick out of this one.

 Comment Written 30-May-2018


reply by the author on 30-May-2018
    Hi there;

    Thank you for the R&R. I'm glad you enjoyed Bernie's latest story.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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What a sweet and fun short story. Love that it's non-fiction and you have so much action-packed emotion going on. Gotta enjoy a dog who has a great time rolling in the compost pile! Cute photo to accompany your writing too!

 Comment Written 30-May-2018


reply by the author on 30-May-2018
    Hi there;

    Thank you for the R&R. I'm glad you enjoyed Bernie's latest story.
Comment from royowen
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In my experience doggies like to roll in dead things, smelly things, a little different from cats who like to clean and preen themselves, and show disdain at smelly dogs. We had to keep our dog, Buddy away from smelly, dead things, especially at the beach. Beautifully written, cunning Bernie, what a smart dog. The is an excellent article dear Patty/ Bernie, well done, blesings, Roy

 Comment Written 30-May-2018


reply by the author on 30-May-2018
    Hi there;

    Thank you for the R&R. I'm glad you enjoyed Bernie's latest story.
reply by royowen on 30-May-2018
    Heh heh
Comment from c_lucas
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Message to Bernie. Be careful; if you catch the mistress in the wrong move, you won't be wearing the compost pile. You will become part of it. LOL This is well written.

 Comment Written 30-May-2018


reply by the author on 30-May-2018
    Hi there;

    Thank you for the R&R. I'm glad you enjoyed Bernie's latest story.
reply by c_lucas on 31-May-2018
    You're welcome, Patty.
Comment from lyenochka
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So cute how different their personalities are! I'm glad you're in a house now and that Bernie and Howie can go in and out for exercise on their own. Cute story. Glad you got a break, too! Lol.

 Comment Written 30-May-2018


reply by the author on 30-May-2018
    Hi there;

    Thank you for the R&R. I'm glad you enjoyed Bernie's latest story.