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2018 Bernie and Howie Stories

Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Favorite Dog"
...stories and poems about the boys

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Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. I guess there is a lot of sibling rivalry between these two sweet pups. But I bet they would worry if one were missing. Thanks for giving us a peek into a day with Bernie and Howie.

 Comment Written 10-May-2018


reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    Hi, Helen;
    Yes, these little boys are much worse than my children ever were; they are constantly vying for my attention and time. I do love to write about them though, and they are the best company.

    And, unlike my children did in their teen years, they do NOT talk back,

    Thank you for reading,

    ~patty~
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Patty. I was so upset to read this: "Placing her fingers at the base of his ears, she scratched on his favorite spot, and Bernie went to doggie Heaven." I started reading the story from the beginning all over again to see if I missed something. It sounded as if Bernie died "went to doggie Heaven." I re-read everything carefully and realized you meant that Bernie was zoned out because of his ear rub. WHEW! I was so relieved. Other than that misunderstanding, a great segment about Bernie and Howie. Marilyn

 Comment Written 10-May-2018


reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    Oh, no!
    I'm so sorry I scared you.

    If something should happen to either of my 'boys,' I'm not sure, but I don't think I will be able to write for some time.
reply by BeasPeas on 10-May-2018
    I understand completely, Patty. I have "lost" darling pets while being on FS. It actually helped me to write about them, but not without crying as I wrote. Let's hope our dear fur babies will be with us for a long time. Marilyn
Comment from LaFrance
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Cute names for your canine friends Your writing was very spontaneous and very observant of the behaviors of your canines. A very delightful tail waggler.

 Comment Written 10-May-2018


reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    Thank you so much.
Comment from c_lucas
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Dogs are like children, always seeking attention. This s very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.

 Comment Written 10-May-2018


reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    Hi, Charlie;

    Thank you so much for the lovely review.
reply by c_lucas on 10-May-2018
    You're welcome, Patti. Charlie
Comment from apky
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Not you had not written about Bernie and Howie for quite some time. All the more I enjoyed this delightful domestic sibling rivalry and cosy hominess.

Dancing around her feet, they each took a treat when it (was) offered.

He licked his lips, and he settles(settled) down for a deep sleep.

 Comment Written 10-May-2018


reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    Hi, Aki;
    Thank you for catching the nits. Yup, the boys were clamoring for a story about them today. Bernie threatened to go on a doggy strike and not sleep with me anymore.

    I'm glad you enjoyed the tail...tale

    ~patty~
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I love your Howie and Bernie stories. I completely understand. I have had jealous dogs and jealous cats. They each one to believe they are my favorite pet.

 Comment Written 10-May-2018


reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    Hi, Barbara;
    Yes, as I'm writing now, I had to let Bernie climb in my lap. So, Howie is lying across my feet. We've had a day full of insecurities. Thank you for reading,

    ~patty~
Comment from Cindy Warren
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That's cute. They're just like kids, each thinking the other gets more attention. A few weeks ago I was tempted to adopt a Morkie (Maltese/Yorkie cross) But the cats wouldn't have been impressed and I'm at work too much to look after a dog. The snuggles would have been nice, tho.

 Comment Written 10-May-2018


reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    Hi, Cindy;

    Bernie is a Morkie. Yes, cats and any type of terrier will not mix well.

    Now, Howie was raised with a cat and he loves them.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written story about Howie and Bernie. They are always a treat to read about, and I enjoy their little competition to get the mistresses attention.

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 Comment Written 10-May-2018


reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    Hi, Sandra;
    Thank you for reading. I appreciate you catching the bit,
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I've missed them, Patty, it was nice to see them again and have a smile at their antics to get your attention. Bless them. I hope you didn't forget to bring your parcel in. Well done, my friend, don't let them stay away for so long in future. :))Sandra xx

 Comment Written 10-May-2018


reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    Hi, Sandra;

    The boys insisted I write about them - today!
Comment from royowen
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I think you did a super lob with this dear Patty, yes sirree dogs are such affectionate people (you should read ideasaregems-Dawn's Prissy story) I think this is a great interpretation of "dog speak" I've read, although we've never owner two dogs at a time, but a collection of cats as well as a dog. Well done Pstty, super job, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 10-May-2018


reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    Hi, Roy;
    THANK YOU so much for the lovely review of my latest Howie and Bernie story. I love writing about my 'boys.'

    ~patty~
    the sixth star was a special treat
reply by royowen on 10-May-2018
    I'd love to give more, but they limit all the same.