Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Carolyn. I didn't think I'd seen you on FS for a while. Glad to see you started off with a contest piece. Nicely composed loop poem. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 04-May-2018

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reply by the author on 04-May-2018

Hi Marilyn,
good to see you too. Thank you for your best wishes. I hope to be
around more. It is a busy life.
Carolyn

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Carolyn, so good to see you sweet girl...I hope you are well...I read your poem twice you...is does go loop T loop...it was fun to read...I will check out the contest...very well written you...love your poem....and your picture says it all...love you much...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 04-May-2018

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reply by the author on 04-May-2018

Thank you so much Linda. good to see you too. I appreciate the best wishes,
Love, Carolyn

reply by l.raven on 06-May-2018

you are so welcome sweet girl...love you...xxoo

Comment from Harry Smith

Excellent

Great picture. I must try writing this style of poetry. I really like this style. This poem is exceptionally well written with a prefect picture. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 04-May-2018

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reply by the author on 04-May-2018

Thanks Harry for the comments and the great rating, Do try it, it was fun...
Carolyn

Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Excellent

Welcome back, Carolyn. So nice to see something from you again. I like the format of a loop poem. Enjoying life to the fullest, and doing one's best makes one a winner in my books. Good luck in the contest with this fine entry.

Hugs,
Connie

 Comment Written 03-May-2018

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reply by the author on 04-May-2018

Thanks Connie,
I appreciate your fine comments and best wishes. It is good to
be back if only for a spot check now and then.
Hugs back to you,
Carolyn

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Hi Carolyn. What a treat to see you back and posting again, and with a terrific loop poem too!

You've woven together your end words and start words seamlessly.

So good to see you and best wishes to you in the contest.

Gloria

 Comment Written 03-May-2018

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reply by the author on 03-May-2018

Thank you Gloria, I'm nit sure how often I will show up, but it's always good to see you too...😊

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

This is a fine loop poem contest entry. You looped when you were supposed to loop. You followed the abcb rhyme scheme well. This poetry form can be tricky for folks like me, but you handled it well. Best wishes in the contest.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 03-May-2018

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reply by the author on 03-May-2018

Thanks Joy for your fine comments and rating. T

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Loop Poetry writing prompt.
Your verse tells of day and night and seasons, all well looped.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 03-May-2018

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reply by the author on 03-May-2018

Thank you Sharon, I appreciate your encouragement.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I like the cleverness of the loop poem, it gives this continuities to the narrative that no other form can give Carolyn, (welcome back). I see you haven't lost any of your deft abilities dear friend. This is a great entry, one of the best actually. Written in smooth lines and the required abcb rhyming. A great entry Carolyn. Blessyou

 Comment Written 03-May-2018

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reply by the author on 03-May-2018

Thanks Roy, I would like to read other entries, are they listed somewhere or do they just pop up?
I don't know how much I will be on fanstory, but I changed from notesandmore to my full name. Tell Elaine hello.
Love, Carolyn

reply by royowen on 03-May-2018

Not sure Carolyn, if it's a site contest it's random, but if member sponsored there should be voting booth in contests somewhere. Say hello to Larry, bless you both. R & E.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I wish you luck Carolyn with this loop poem, some well chosen words for the loop here which kept the poem on track and in the right direction, loops are not easy, good luck, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-May-2018

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reply by the author on 03-May-2018

Thank you Dolly !!!

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

A very good loop poem. I enjoyed reading it. Very concisely written and well crafted within the criteria with a good message.
I wish you good luck in the competition. Best wishes Jen.

 Comment Written 03-May-2018

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reply by the author on 03-May-2018

Thank Jen, I appreciate your encouraging words.