Comment from nancy_e_davis

Exceptional

IT Isn't the end? I thought it might be. Everything turned out well for everybody. LOL I suppose you need to let Jim in on how it all turned out for Francis and Joe. I really enjoy your time travel stories. I wonder if 'The powers that be' heard you say you would like to know the reason for it all. Maybe you will go on with that? Well done my friend. Nancy

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018

Thank you so much, Nancy, for those lovely stars and wonderful review. No, it's not quite the end. I have four more parts to go. I've written them, just have to edit and correct them. The ending will open up the last book in the trilogy. I keep saying that to myself, but I can see more stories waiting for Veronica! We'll have to see. Thank you for all your support, my friend. Big hugs. Sandra xxxx

Comment from apky

Excellent

As soon as I read Veronica's passage below, I knew that all would be well. I'm so glad the whole business with Joe and Rosie and Frankie worked out just great.

And Milred is back as right as rain. Wonderful.

>> I couldn't believe it, I was back in time again. Had the 'powers that be' been listening to me as I discussed it with Mildred? It certainly seemed that way. I gazed around at all the things laid out on the floor of the sitting room, and it looked very much like Joe and Rosie were packing up their belongings. I walked over to Joe and asked if he could come outside for a few minutes. The surprise in his eyes at seeing me again made me smile. He didn't say a word, though. I had to give him credit for the way he was able to react when other people were around when I was there.<< You put this so well it was vivid and almost pulpable, Sandra. Loved it.

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 Comment Written 29-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018

Thank you, Aki. I had to let everyone know what happened. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Nearly at the end of this book and then it will be the last book coming up to finish the trilogy. I think! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra. xxx

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

I am so happy things turned out so well. I am wondering and hoping that Veronica will have more work to do so I can read about it.

Once breakfast was over and the they were dressed to go out and play in the garden, we were able to sit back and relax. (not sure 'and the they' that the 'the' is supposed to be there.)

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018

Thank you so very much for the lovely review and all the lovely stars, Barbara. And a huge thank you for finding that error. I'd edited that part and hadn't taken it out. This story is drawing to a close, there is about 4, possibly five parts to go. And yes, Veronica will have another problem from the past to sort out. That should end the trilogy... but who knows! lol. Big hugs, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from MelB

Excellent

A very nice chapter, Sandra. Wonderful dialogue, even though I have to read slow to follow it. LOL I liked the comment about the suspenders, instead of suspense.

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 Comment Written 29-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018

I'm really glad you liked the suspenders bit, I didn't want to offend anyone, but I thought it would be a funny thing that Mildred would say. lol. Thank you so much, Melissa, for your lovely review. Big hugs, Sandra xxx

reply by MelB on 29-Apr-2018

Great humor, Sandra! You're very welcome. I'm glad you've had so much success with these books:)

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018

Aww, thank you, that is so nice of you. :)) xxxx