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Comment from Harry Smith
Beautiful presentation for this poem that is exceptionally well written with lots and lots of both imagery and emotions. The reader really enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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Beautiful presentation for this poem that is exceptionally well written with lots and lots of both imagery and emotions. The reader really enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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Hi Harry,cThanks so much I do enjoy your reviews and suppport through this April Cheers Christine
Comment from robyn corum
Christine,
This is the second ANZAC poem I have seen today -- wonderful efforts to make sure that we all remember and respect those men and women who have helped fight to make sure the world stays the safe place it currently is. I've just been watching some documentaries sharing some of these facts. Very impressive!
Thank you!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Christine,
This is the second ANZAC poem I have seen today -- wonderful efforts to make sure that we all remember and respect those men and women who have helped fight to make sure the world stays the safe place it currently is. I've just been watching some documentaries sharing some of these facts. Very impressive!
Thank you!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Hi Robyn, Thank you and yes Anzac day has special significance in Australia and all school kids grow up knowing what it means and attend services I took my 10 year old granddaughter to the 100 year service a couple of years ago and wore my uncles medals it was very moving. A special day shared between us so I also acknowledge this day and pleased you saw our poems (Roy's was lovely too) Cheers Christine
Comment from royowen
Well done Christine, l loved this acrostic, for Anzac I put, Australia and NZ armed forces, I think your's is the correct one, but the other two legs were left out. Beautifully done, a great comprehensive write on, you included others in the conflict, not just Aussies. One would think we were the only forces there, same at Tobruk, I thought there was only Aussies there until I looked it up. Well done, wonderful post, blessjngs, Roy
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Well done Christine, l loved this acrostic, for Anzac I put, Australia and NZ armed forces, I think your's is the correct one, but the other two legs were left out. Beautifully done, a great comprehensive write on, you included others in the conflict, not just Aussies. One would think we were the only forces there, same at Tobruk, I thought there was only Aussies there until I looked it up. Well done, wonderful post, blessjngs, Roy
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Hi Roy Thanks you kind sir I think we needed to fly our Aussie flag on this day. It is always a special day for me Anzac day has been reverred in Australia all over and I remember Marches and ceremonies from way back from being a little girl in primary school and always think about this day and I think we both did a good job. Many Cheers Christine
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When dad was alive, it was his once -a -year day. And about midday, I had to pick him up from the local RSL, with his mate Arthur, they were always in a state. I miss those days. Bless you Roy
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me too I took my granddaughter to the 100 year dawn service and shared this day with her a couple of years ago and we both wore my uncles medal Cheers my friend Christine
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That's marvellous Christine
Comment from aryr
This was well done and very much enjoyed, Christine. I loved the format especially with some of the letters you used. I have a temporary neighbor that is from New Zealand so it was good that I could share a tiny piece of knowledge. Well done, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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This was well done and very much enjoyed, Christine. I loved the format especially with some of the letters you used. I have a temporary neighbor that is from New Zealand so it was good that I could share a tiny piece of knowledge. Well done, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Hi Ary, Thank you for reading my poem and I am pleased to share some history with you . i like Acrostics they lend themselves to some interesting prose Cheers Christine
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You are very welcome Christine.
Comment from Susan B. Lamphier
Christine--I am learning so much from you, about your life and about your history. I saw the picture of the poppy and thought about WWI, but I was not aware of ANZAC day or what occurred just over 100 years ago. Thank you so much for this lesson!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Christine--I am learning so much from you, about your life and about your history. I saw the picture of the poppy and thought about WWI, but I was not aware of ANZAC day or what occurred just over 100 years ago. Thank you so much for this lesson!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Hi Susan, Thanks for reading my Anzac day poem and yes this is a big event in Australia and NZ in particular with dawn services and marches throught the country. There would not be one Aussie who didnt know about Anzac day I am pleased you enjoyed this lesson in our history Cheers Christine
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic poem about ANZAC day remembrance. Each war we fight small or big have consequences and no one will freely agree to making war.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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A very well-written acrostic poem about ANZAC day remembrance. Each war we fight small or big have consequences and no one will freely agree to making war.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Hi Sandra, Thank you for your review and you are so write War is not a free choice but one with severe consequences for many Cheers Christine
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Chrissy, what a lovely acrostic in remembrance of Anzac Day, today, and you have told the story very succinctly. That together with your author notes is a lovely dedication to all the men who fought and those who died fighting for freedom. Gorgeous picture, one lovely poppy, and the overall display is gorgeous. Warm regards Dorothy xx
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Hi Chrissy, what a lovely acrostic in remembrance of Anzac Day, today, and you have told the story very succinctly. That together with your author notes is a lovely dedication to all the men who fought and those who died fighting for freedom. Gorgeous picture, one lovely poppy, and the overall display is gorgeous. Warm regards Dorothy xx
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Hi Dorothy, Thank you and yes todsy is a special day in Australia, our Anzac tradition is very strong and reveered .One has to acknowledge those gone before us Cheers Christine
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Such a resonating acrostic to commemorate Anzac Day and the rememberances here are poignant and we should never forget the losses, a beautiful tribute Christine, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Such a resonating acrostic to commemorate Anzac Day and the rememberances here are poignant and we should never forget the losses, a beautiful tribute Christine, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Hi Dolly, Thank you for reading my acrostic for Anzac day here inAustralia and other parts of the world it is a well remembered day Cheers Christine
Comment from Gloria ....
Great acrostic Christine. I still maintain that if history were taught in this poetic form, more students would take a massive interest in the subject.
That would be me. I didn't know about Anzac Day, and now I have a little better idea.
Very much enjoyed.
Gloria
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Great acrostic Christine. I still maintain that if history were taught in this poetic form, more students would take a massive interest in the subject.
That would be me. I didn't know about Anzac Day, and now I have a little better idea.
Very much enjoyed.
Gloria
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Hi Gloria, Thank you for reading my Anzac poem acrostic and hes maybe you are right a good way to teach history I am pleased to share this day with you Cheers Christine
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Christine. This is a fabulous remembrance of Anzac Day. Your acrostic gives honor to all of those who fought for freedom, both survivors and not. Very nice job with this fine poem. Marilyn
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Hi Christine. This is a fabulous remembrance of Anzac Day. Your acrostic gives honor to all of those who fought for freedom, both survivors and not. Very nice job with this fine poem. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Hi Marilyn, Thanks for reading my acrostic Anzac day is always a special day and I have been remembering this since a little girl in school and still brings a tear. Cheers Christine
