It's a Struggle
Life after death4 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-syllable poem, It's a Struggle, finds happiness and loneliness duking it out again. Happiness should win, since loneliness can only defeat itself.
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
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This twenty-syllable poem, It's a Struggle, finds happiness and loneliness duking it out again. Happiness should win, since loneliness can only defeat itself.
Comment Written 05-May-2018
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
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Thanks for both the comments and the stars!
Comment from Miriam Collins
Great job for erupting such feelings in you readers! It is a battle everyday to hang on to happiness when so much bad can consume us. You did a great job in creating a very real and relatable poem.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Great job for erupting such feelings in you readers! It is a battle everyday to hang on to happiness when so much bad can consume us. You did a great job in creating a very real and relatable poem.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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The struggle is real. Thank you so very much! I appreciate your comments and stars.
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Pam is this you? If not then author my question to you is, why sit around and grieve when you can be happy. Because grief releases things in your spirit and your soul that takes away from your life and drains your vital organs of strength and function. But on the other hand happiness and joy releases things in your spirit and your soul abd your vital organs that will cause you to live long and healthier. Why live long and miserable when you can live long, healthy and enjoy life. I refuse to sit around and grieve when there's a healthier joyful life I hope you can come to that and experuence some joyful days befire you part this life. THE power is in the choice. Have a blessed day
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Pam is this you? If not then author my question to you is, why sit around and grieve when you can be happy. Because grief releases things in your spirit and your soul that takes away from your life and drains your vital organs of strength and function. But on the other hand happiness and joy releases things in your spirit and your soul abd your vital organs that will cause you to live long and healthier. Why live long and miserable when you can live long, healthy and enjoy life. I refuse to sit around and grieve when there's a healthier joyful life I hope you can come to that and experuence some joyful days befire you part this life. THE power is in the choice. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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No Mary, not Pam but Beck. I was just writing about the struggle that being happy without loved ones near is for me sometimes. Depression isn't miserable... it is like glasses smeared with oil. One can't see the good stuff until the glasses are clean and shiny. Tears cleanse the soul... and returns rose-colored glasses to life.
Thank you for your review. I appreciate your comments and stars.
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I appreciate your work Beck. Hang on in there girlie theres an audience waiting on ya
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Thanks,Mary!
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My pleasure
Comment from William Ross
Nice job on the write. Unless you are happy being lonely, loneliness usually wins I think. Good luck on this and have a great day
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Nice job on the write. Unless you are happy being lonely, loneliness usually wins I think. Good luck on this and have a great day
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Thank you, William. I appreciate your comments and stars.
