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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from frogbook
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Great description and alliteration. An excellent piece of data describing this illusive lizard fellow. You came up with great words to use going along with the letters.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
    Thanks, FB
Comment from lyenochka
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Well done acrostic poem with alliteration in most of the lines. And it makes me think of people who live like chameleons either online or in person. Makes you wonder if they are dangerous or not.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
    Thanks, lyenochka
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written acrostic poem about the Chameleon. You chose very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing! Blessings Teri

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
    Thanks, Teri
reply by Teri7 on 24-Apr-2018
    you are so welcome my friend!
Comment from nomi338
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That is a great description of said reptile. Your skillset reflects a military training that would have gained you a possible nod of approval from your squad leader. Not too much, no sense in swelling your head and making you overconfident. Good on you for this.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
    Thanks, nomi (and Seargent Wehri).
Comment from judiverse
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This guy is definitely a member of the CIA (Chameleon Intelligence Agency). I think the words you've chosen are fitting for that organization--escaping detection, enigmatic, and neutralizing noticeability. Where are the females to swoon over this Bond-like creature? Excellent word choices. Nice alliteration with limited locatability and neutralizing noticeability. Fun piece. judi

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
    Thanks, Judi, for the thorough review. Bill
Comment from meeshu
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great acrostic form poem, bill. the last four are the best, you were starting to have fun weren't you. well it was fun to read. good luck in the future.......meeshu

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
    Thank you, Meeshu, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Bridget Myer
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What a refreshing piece with firm well thought out lines for your acrostic poem.
It is descriptive and well thought out to achieve such a joyfully amazing natural piece.
I enjoyed it immensely.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
    Thank you, Bridget