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San Francisco Summer of Love

The Haight during summer of love

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Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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What a great nod to the timeframe of the 1960s and all the historical factors you were able to write in. This is a great entry for the poetry contest. Good luck to you!

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
    Thank you Cindy for your thoughtful review and excellent rating
Comment from Swampfox1
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My son traveled to San Francisco four years or so ago, he got robbed the second day he was there. Yep, swallowing a pill could take away the feeling of reality, ergo the small town feel, just kidding. Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
    Thank you, Swampfox1 for your nice review and excellent rating

    My husband lived it. I was too young. He was 19 and I was 13 at the time.
reply by Swampfox1 on 25-Apr-2018
    Wow, quite a difference in age for you being so young at the time, in later years it doesn't seem so great. Were you married then
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
    No. I was twice as old when we got married
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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"San Francisco Summer of Love", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work is indeed a real deal. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this standard.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
    Thank you duchessofdrumb for your lovely review and excellent rating
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 25-Apr-2018
    Pamusart, as always you're very welcome.

    Take care, God bless you and take care,
    the Duchess
Comment from F Scott Hafner
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My ex also lived there. Such adventures she had. I too was too young. But has there ever been a time when culture and substance drove so much change in society. Thanks for bringing the time back to life.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
    Hopefully the young people?s le of Parlanf May be leading an inclusive. Thank you for your thoughtful review rating and excellent
reply by F Scott Hafner on 25-Apr-2018
    Nice work
Comment from emptypage
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God, you just made all this ... angst I have run through my veins again with vigor, and resentment, lol. I was born in 1963 so I'm the very last year of baby boomers, I think, and if I'd been just about six years older I would have been at Woodstock, at Haight, so many places and events I just missed.

Great write.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
    Thank you emptypage for your lovely review and excellent rating
Comment from Harry Smith
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The picture is outstanding and was a compliment to the poem that the reader really didn't understand but the reader will be back to red more.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
    Thank you Harry for your thoughtful review and five star rating

    1966 saw a hippie revolution in the Haight Ashbury neighborhood of San Francisco. It spawned the hippie movement. It was called the summer of love because hippies just wanted peace
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. Well, I'm sure it is a different place now compared to the 1960's but in that context, I can see what the "pill" refers to. Great use of internal rhymes and the assonance of the long "e" sound.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
    Thank you, lyenochka for your lovely review and excellent rating
Comment from meeshu
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very good 'little lune' poem. the Haight is a mythical place in my mind. sounds like you were closer to it. I'm writing something now about my childhood in the 60's. we could compare notes...........meeshu

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
    I think I am seven years older than you are. Thank you for your thoughtful review and five star rating
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Lune and an excellent photo of the San Francisco bridge. It is the most photographed bridge as far as I know and everytime it is a feast for the eyes.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
    Thank you, Sandra for your thoughtful review and excellent rating
Comment from ronnie k
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I didn't have the pleasure to be there so i thank you for the complete look with a by only having good taste and reviewing goo, no excellent poetry, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
    Thank you, Ronnie for your lovely review and excellent rating