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When I arrive home tired after a busy day9 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Cinquain Poetry writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of getting home to a serene atmosphere.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Cinquain Poetry writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of getting home to a serene atmosphere.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Winslow
Dear Jenin,
Home is where the heart is and in your case it provides a calm and serene refuge from the outside world. Not all homes are like that. (LOL)
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Dear Jenin,
Home is where the heart is and in your case it provides a calm and serene refuge from the outside world. Not all homes are like that. (LOL)
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from LIJ Red
I believe you have written an excellent cinquain for the prompt. If you work at a hectic or pressurized job, getting home is a lifesaver some days.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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I believe you have written an excellent cinquain for the prompt. If you work at a hectic or pressurized job, getting home is a lifesaver some days.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is a good and very descriptive poem describing home. You've done a great job presenting how home can be considered one's sanctuary. I enjoyed reading this. Well done Jenintorre!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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This is a good and very descriptive poem describing home. You've done a great job presenting how home can be considered one's sanctuary. I enjoyed reading this. Well done Jenintorre!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from RodG
Your poem describes what most of us seek in a "home"--a place to relax, a sanctuary. You say it all succinctly in this cinquain. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Your poem describes what most of us seek in a "home"--a place to relax, a sanctuary. You say it all succinctly in this cinquain. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Many thanks for the review. Much appreciated.
Comment from aryr
This was enjoyable to read. It was short and simple in nature but it emanated a sense of calm, peace and relaxing. I do believe it followed the criteria for the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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This was enjoyable to read. It was short and simple in nature but it emanated a sense of calm, peace and relaxing. I do believe it followed the criteria for the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Many thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello Jenintorre, this is a very strong cinquain for the contest, and this will no doubt be popular. The image of home and hearth is a warming one. And the day brings so many things to do before you can be in that lovely place where you can relax and let go, home. I noticed no errors, and this is a work I'd recommend to others for review, Ana.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Hello Jenintorre, this is a very strong cinquain for the contest, and this will no doubt be popular. The image of home and hearth is a warming one. And the day brings so many things to do before you can be in that lovely place where you can relax and let go, home. I noticed no errors, and this is a work I'd recommend to others for review, Ana.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Many thanks Ana for your great review
Comment from meeshu
this is a nice and cozy poem, jennin. about a place where you can put your feet up by the fire (on non-restriction days), or enjoy your brown yard (water only on blue days). nevermind.............meeshu
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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this is a nice and cozy poem, jennin. about a place where you can put your feet up by the fire (on non-restriction days), or enjoy your brown yard (water only on blue days). nevermind.............meeshu
Comment Written 23-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Glad you liked it. Thanks Meeshu
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Jen. This is a good entry for the contest. I just entered this contest today as well. Who does not feel better at home? Well, that was a dumb question. Abused kids, wives and lack of air conditioning are all good reasons not to be at home. Most people are most comfortable st home. Well done. It is likely a universal truth. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Hi, Jen. This is a good entry for the contest. I just entered this contest today as well. Who does not feel better at home? Well, that was a dumb question. Abused kids, wives and lack of air conditioning are all good reasons not to be at home. Most people are most comfortable st home. Well done. It is likely a universal truth. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 23-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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There have been times in the past when I have dreaded going home but not now. That is why it is so special. Many thanks for reading and reviewing.
