Glad I Can't Read Minds
A Horror Story... Just Sayin'49 total reviews
Comment from meeshu
this is so great, Art A. I so enjoy reviewing your work, it is always on point and your variety in style is refreshing to read. mind-reading would be the worst "extra-sense" for ones self esteem.........meeshu
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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this is so great, Art A. I so enjoy reviewing your work, it is always on point and your variety in style is refreshing to read. mind-reading would be the worst "extra-sense" for ones self esteem.........meeshu
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Hey Meeshu... I just needed to take my tie off and be irreverent. thanks yours, diana
Comment from Cindy Warren
Haha, sometimes I can guess what someone is thinking and I need to duck. And it's a good thing they can't read MY mind. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Haha, sometimes I can guess what someone is thinking and I need to duck. And it's a good thing they can't read MY mind. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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So true... I just wanted to throw something a little bit irreverent but true out there. yours, diana
Comment from Alexander Vasa
ahahahah Great poem for the three line competition. I enjoy your poetry and think the same as you, it would be pretty scary if others could read minds, and we read theirs. I wouldn't want to be able to do it either.
Nice word choices and you say a lot in three lines. No errors and loved the picture you have used. I imagine it would have been challenging finding art to go with this work. Hope you have a good day, and best of luck with this entry, Ana.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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ahahahah Great poem for the three line competition. I enjoy your poetry and think the same as you, it would be pretty scary if others could read minds, and we read theirs. I wouldn't want to be able to do it either.
Nice word choices and you say a lot in three lines. No errors and loved the picture you have used. I imagine it would have been challenging finding art to go with this work. Hope you have a good day, and best of luck with this entry, Ana.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Hey Anastasia... Alway an honor when you stop by. thanks for the read and the stellar review kiddo. yours, diana
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Oh I am sure I would have to duck, especially at work. Of course my boss would need to duck a lot too, when he first came at least. I'm used to him now. =} Well done and so true.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Oh I am sure I would have to duck, especially at work. Of course my boss would need to duck a lot too, when he first came at least. I'm used to him now. =} Well done and so true.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Hey Roxanna... It is one of life's little jokes... It is true of human interaction and that is not to say we don't love them to death... we humans can be a tough lot. yours, diana
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this. I'm inclined to agree with you. I think that some people's thoughts of us would cause us to do more than duck. This is cute with lots of truth intertwined in it. Well done Artasylum!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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I like this. I'm inclined to agree with you. I think that some people's thoughts of us would cause us to do more than duck. This is cute with lots of truth intertwined in it. Well done Artasylum!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Hey Jeffrey... I just needed to be irreverent. don't see that much here. been here a few weeks... still every once in a while i have to pull out the kidding on the square. yours, di
Comment from Harry Smith
Excellent picture selection for this short poem that is just full of both emotions and lots and lots of imagery. I did laugh because the poet is so right.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Excellent picture selection for this short poem that is just full of both emotions and lots and lots of imagery. I did laugh because the poet is so right.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Hey Harry... As ever I thank you so much for your stellar and thoughtful review. yours, diana
Comment from Mastery
Wow! Good three-liner, (May I ask you rname by the way.) It is so much easier to address people by their given name rather than user names. Know what I mean? I am going to watch your work more closely as I like your originality. Blesings, Bob
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Wow! Good three-liner, (May I ask you rname by the way.) It is so much easier to address people by their given name rather than user names. Know what I mean? I am going to watch your work more closely as I like your originality. Blesings, Bob
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Hi Bob... Let me introduce myself it is Diana... thanks... I'm trying to bring a fresh point of view to the table here. again humbled. Remember Diana (art asylum) yours, diana
Comment from N. Rabwar
Your poem is both humorous and true. I am certainly glad I don't read minds. I gave it a five star rating for its humor, incisive words and interesting message. Good luck on your contest. It is a good entry.
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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Your poem is both humorous and true. I am certainly glad I don't read minds. I gave it a five star rating for its humor, incisive words and interesting message. Good luck on your contest. It is a good entry.
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Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Thanks just in one of those moods today... I'm just this side of irreverent... thanks so much yours, diana
Comment from Bill Schott
This three-line poem, Glad I Can't Read Minds, follows the idea that it's better to feel what someone thinks about us than to know for sure.
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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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This three-line poem, Glad I Can't Read Minds, follows the idea that it's better to feel what someone thinks about us than to know for sure.
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Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Hey Bill... The world my be very different it I could read thoughts. yours, diana
