Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Fabulous and so true. It's a blessing that we cannot (at this point anyway) read each other's true thoughts. It puts forth the possibility that other's may indeed be sending darts our way. Good luck in the contest with this worthy entry. Marilyn

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018

Say Hallelujah and Amen! Looking forward to any days I don't have to duck... thanks for reading BeasPeas.

Comment from johnwilson

Excellent

ha ha! I needed a laugh today, and you gave it to me! The visual representing your words was perfect! I will have to take a peek at your work more often. Hopefully, you write longer pieces as well, because you seem to have the knack for writing!

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018

It's been 3 lonely (not really) decades in a brown LA haze. I do write longer pieces. Just finished one. LA traffic seems to put me into a writing coma at stop lights. Thankfully, it was a long light... I imagined an Indian sacred hunt. Not posted yet. soon, hope you can read... uh, oh the light just changed and the guy in back is honking already. Got to go. yours, di xo

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

Yes so true. This is a very good three line poem on a very original subject. You have said it all in very few words. I wish you good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018

thanks for the good wishes jenintorre... i'm crossing my fingers. yours, dixo

Comment from Hitcher

Excellent

I don't think you be be alone there friend, there would be a few of us belly crawling out of a room I reckon: )). I enjoyed the humor of your nice little 3 lined poem and wish you well with it.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018

I've gotten the best comments on this one... I'm with you... If we could, I think there would be a body count. thanks for the good wishes. yours, diana

Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Excellent

Thanks for sharing your recognized work. Much success to you in the contest. And you're right we cant read other people's minds if we colud then a lot of deaths, a lot of accidents would be prevented.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018

I agree... I feel like the body count would be high. yours, diana

reply by Mary Hollingsworth on 25-Apr-2018

EXACTLY

reply by Mary Hollingsworth on 25-Apr-2018

Absolutely

Comment from Dorinda Palmisano

Exceptional

Thanks for the wonderful artwork you chose for this piece. Your few words, simply put leave one with quite a story. Great work. Dorinda

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018

Hey Dorinda... thanks so much... I hadn't planned on doing the ABC but I ran past this face and knew instantly he needed a bard poet. yours, again thanks so much for your stellar/plus one review. I'm honored. yours, diana

Comment from happykat4

Excellent

Great 3 line poem entry. What you have expressed in the written words, all of us have thought at some time or another. Best of luck in the contest. Kat

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018

Thanks so much Kat for you lovely review and stars. thanks so much yours, diana

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

lol, Isn't that the truth, lol. A nice three-line poem, my friend. It would be be pretty frightening to read others minds. Good luck! ~Kerry

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018

I know... it is inconceivable just imagining it... not to mention overwhelming. yours, diana

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 26-Apr-2018

Sure is, lol

Comment from persevere

Excellent

This is a thought provoking 3 line poem. The need to duck conjures up darts of criticism issuing forth from other minds. This makes me question what other eyes behold in my thoughts! I would need some instruction in developing a poker face.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018

Or so true persevere... duck. fun and thoughtful review thanks so much yours, diana

Comment from Swampfox1

Excellent

A great entry into the 3 line Poetry Contest. That would be difficult to see a thought, but it is an impossible task well explained or to see a thought , the electronic images and thereby transpose them and decipher them quickly enough to allow a duck is miraculous. Great job, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018

Well since you put it that way kiddo... nonetheless, the duck is in the chain of electronic images and happens instantly. Great review as always. yours di