Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Hello, Cindy, again, :)

This is a good twenty syllable poem. I wish you luck in the contest.

Love the 'Prelude to Murder' :P You should do well in the contest.

Have a great rest of day,
Nome

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

Thanks, again. Glad you think it will do well. Hope you have a great day too.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about romantic regrets, sometimes in our life of love makes a bad intention, after the walks at sunset, they begin with candlelit dinner s; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

Thanks. Glad you liked it.

Comment from Katya

Excellent

Oh come on, surely some of us can have these experiences without lethal result! You don't really think life is like a cowboy movie where the sexually active person always gets killed, do you?

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 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

Of course it's not real. It's just that I was in a terrible mood the day I wrote it. LOL Thanks for the review.

reply by Katya on 22-Apr-2018

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Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 20 Syllable Poem writing prompt.
Your short verse takes a strange twist at the end.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

Thanks. I thought it needed a bit of a twist to make it more interesting. Have a great day.