Romantic Regrets
second thoughts24 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match
You captured my attention from the start
This is what I call a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match
You captured my attention from the start
This is what I call a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thanks. I'm so glad you liked it.
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It was my pleasure take care
Cookie
Comment from Poetic Friend
Wow, poor, poor woman (or man)! Apparently, he/she is dating a psycho murderer. Hopefully, they did not meet online. What an sad ending!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
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Wow, poor, poor woman (or man)! Apparently, he/she is dating a psycho murderer. Hopefully, they did not meet online. What an sad ending!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
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I guess you can't be too careful these days. I was thinking more about it starting out great and ending badly. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Sankey
Wow! What a punch line! Great poem and loved the picture. You did a review for my autobiography "The Little Dog That Wouldn't let Go" ages ago and just going through for final promotion before I try and get it published. I wanted to go through and see how many of my old reviewers were still on FS as a lot have left. There are rewards all over if you want to visit again.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
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Wow! What a punch line! Great poem and loved the picture. You did a review for my autobiography "The Little Dog That Wouldn't let Go" ages ago and just going through for final promotion before I try and get it published. I wanted to go through and see how many of my old reviewers were still on FS as a lot have left. There are rewards all over if you want to visit again.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
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Thanks. So glad you liked it.
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! That's a sudden change. I like how you set the mood with the first three lines and then all of it becomes a completely different story with the last line. Well told with just 20 syllables.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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Wow! That's a sudden change. I like how you set the mood with the first three lines and then all of it becomes a completely different story with the last line. Well told with just 20 syllables.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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Thanks. I thought it needed a little twist at the end. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from robyn corum
OUCH!
I was NOT expecting that last line -- which made this poem all the more fun . In the States (BTW, I noticed you are in Canada, now) there's a TV channel called Investigation Discovery (ID) that's all about crime and murder and you'll find that many of us are sorely addicted to it.
So, then, maybe you'll understand my enjoyment even more. haha! Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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OUCH!
I was NOT expecting that last line -- which made this poem all the more fun . In the States (BTW, I noticed you are in Canada, now) there's a TV channel called Investigation Discovery (ID) that's all about crime and murder and you'll find that many of us are sorely addicted to it.
So, then, maybe you'll understand my enjoyment even more. haha! Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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Thanks. We get that channel here, but we have to pay extra for it. I watch it whenever it's on free preview. Glad you enjoyed my fun little poem.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Yikes! I did NOT see that coming, not from the artwork, and not from the first three lines. Wow! What a powerful poem relating a true horror story in only 20 syllables. Extremely well done, IMO - best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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Yikes! I did NOT see that coming, not from the artwork, and not from the first three lines. Wow! What a powerful poem relating a true horror story in only 20 syllables. Extremely well done, IMO - best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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Thanks. I thought it needed a little twist at the end to keep it interesting.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Romantic Regrets", is short, succinct and very much to the point. Candlelit dinners, murder and what comes after make for wonderful reading. I look forward to seeing you next post.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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"Romantic Regrets", is short, succinct and very much to the point. Candlelit dinners, murder and what comes after make for wonderful reading. I look forward to seeing you next post.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Thanks. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Eternal Muse
Wow, what imagery! Who would think that romantic candle light dinners and walks at sunset would be a prelude to murder? Yet, it happens, crimes of passion are common - but what a waste!
I liked your imagination in this one. Draws many pictures in reader's mind.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Wow, what imagery! Who would think that romantic candle light dinners and walks at sunset would be a prelude to murder? Yet, it happens, crimes of passion are common - but what a waste!
I liked your imagination in this one. Draws many pictures in reader's mind.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Thanks. Yes, it happens too often, unfortunately. Glad you liked my little poem.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
lol.... love it~ Little does he or she know what the other is really thinking. That harmless looking steak knife may have other uses out there in the desert where no one will see or hear the screams. Hehe.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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lol.... love it~ Little does he or she know what the other is really thinking. That harmless looking steak knife may have other uses out there in the desert where no one will see or hear the screams. Hehe.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Thanks. So glad you loved it. I thought it needed a little twist at the end.
Comment from F Scott Hafner
Interesting concept - what is summer? That is for the reader to decide. But the inclusion of regret in the title lends some clue. Such simple words and subject may have far greater meaning.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Interesting concept - what is summer? That is for the reader to decide. But the inclusion of regret in the title lends some clue. Such simple words and subject may have far greater meaning.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Thanks. It's always up to the reader to interpret, but really it was just me getting some snark out of my system. No great meaning.
