Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Hahaha a great rhyming poem with a wonderful rhythm and meter, Great entry, Best of luck on this and the contest. have a great day.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

Thanks. It was a fun write, and great therapy. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Share a Story in a Poem writing prompt.
Your verse tells a clear and violent story.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

Thanks. I don't expect it to win, but writing it was fun and great therapy. Of course, I would never really do something like that.