Fight of Fancy
Now I feel better!22 total reviews
Comment from ameen786
Patience always help my friend, glad you didn't let your anger overtake you; this is a wonderful way to vent by writing and what a great poem you penned; smooth flow in excellent rhymes; thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Patience always help my friend, glad you didn't let your anger overtake you; this is a wonderful way to vent by writing and what a great poem you penned; smooth flow in excellent rhymes; thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Thanks. If I got in a real fight, it's unlikely I'd win. I'd be the one in a world of hurt. Glad you liked my poem.
Comment from karenina
Okay...hmmmm. Good choice to write and vent...I hear prison is cool this time of year. Sometimes I get so angry with someone (mabe not a personal friend, but a road rager, or rude waitrss or the president (smile))--that I have a special RED notebook (such a good color for ANGER!)---and I go there and let all my mean little thoughts bleed onto those pages....it really helps! Feel better? Good!
Karenina
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Okay...hmmmm. Good choice to write and vent...I hear prison is cool this time of year. Sometimes I get so angry with someone (mabe not a personal friend, but a road rager, or rude waitrss or the president (smile))--that I have a special RED notebook (such a good color for ANGER!)---and I go there and let all my mean little thoughts bleed onto those pages....it really helps! Feel better? Good!
Karenina
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Thanks. I think we've all wanted to slap someone upside the head. In my case it would be a terrible idea. I'd probably end up in the hospital. I'm just not that tough. And I really don't want to hurt anyone. I just needed to get it out of my system.
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I get it....I couldn't kill a butterfly with my grip!
Comment from Ogden
Apparently, it did not work. Your poem is brimming with anger, and one wonders why you are so touchy on the subject, that perhaps there even may have been some validity in his words. As you know, it is said that the truth hurts.
(Just kidding, of course. You're probably as calm as a cucumber.)
;o)
Don (aka Ogden)
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Apparently, it did not work. Your poem is brimming with anger, and one wonders why you are so touchy on the subject, that perhaps there even may have been some validity in his words. As you know, it is said that the truth hurts.
(Just kidding, of course. You're probably as calm as a cucumber.)
;o)
Don (aka Ogden)
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Yep, I was plenty mad when I wrote it. Of course, I'm as cool as a cucumber now. LOL Thanks for the five.
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You're welcome, Cindy. Now don't be lazy. Keep on writing.
Don
Comment from nartoonla
HI, That was delightful, and was it true, ha, he had it coming no doubt and admire you. But do take care. If fiction that was great, if flowed well and was fun, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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HI, That was delightful, and was it true, ha, he had it coming no doubt and admire you. But do take care. If fiction that was great, if flowed well and was fun, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Thanks. It's fiction. The real person I wanted to whomp totally had it coming, but of course I wouldn't really do it. I wrote this instead. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Old Soldier
Good rhythm and flow. There were a few spots that felt forced, but I get it. Its all about having fun and making the reader smile. I enjoyed the read.
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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Good rhythm and flow. There were a few spots that felt forced, but I get it. Its all about having fun and making the reader smile. I enjoyed the read.
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Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Harry Smith
I like the picture you selected for this poem that the reader really enjoyed and laughed because it was a little funny. The poem is full of lots of emotions and plenty of imagery.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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I like the picture you selected for this poem that the reader really enjoyed and laughed because it was a little funny. The poem is full of lots of emotions and plenty of imagery.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Thanks. It was a fun write, and great therapy. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from mermaids
I enjoyed reading this poem. I felt some relief here, your words are a great stress reducer. In writing, we can act out our frustrations. I admire your use of rhyming words that add a smooth flow to your poem.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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I enjoyed reading this poem. I felt some relief here, your words are a great stress reducer. In writing, we can act out our frustrations. I admire your use of rhyming words that add a smooth flow to your poem.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Thanks. I'm sure we've all wanted to smack someone upside the head. This was a fun write and great therapy. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from meeshu
great work, cindy. starts out as a lighthearted limerick, playful and fun. the ending was a little flat for me. I would have seen you, say, hit him every day for a week and then end with a dramatic twist. maybe he hits back, maybe he is your long lost brother, maybe he's a masochist or a cop. just spitballin'......meeshu
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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great work, cindy. starts out as a lighthearted limerick, playful and fun. the ending was a little flat for me. I would have seen you, say, hit him every day for a week and then end with a dramatic twist. maybe he hits back, maybe he is your long lost brother, maybe he's a masochist or a cop. just spitballin'......meeshu
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Hmmm...I hadn't thought about who he might be. Just an imaginary stand-in for someone I really wanted to smack upside the head. You've given me some good ideas. Thanks.
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it could be Epic......mee
Comment from Rasmine
Hello, :)
This is great! I love stories in poems. I hope you have good luck in the competition. :D I'm glad you feel better.
Have a good rest of day.
Nome
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Hello, :)
This is great! I love stories in poems. I hope you have good luck in the competition. :D I'm glad you feel better.
Have a good rest of day.
Nome
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Thanks. This was a great way to get it out of my system. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear, this is quite a violent write, hitting someone with a pot! I'm glad it is just imaginary and you got it out of your system. Clever rhymes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Oh dear, this is quite a violent write, hitting someone with a pot! I'm glad it is just imaginary and you got it out of your system. Clever rhymes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Yep, writing about it is a lot safer than doing it! Of course I wouldn't, no matter how mad I was. Writing this was great therapy. Glad you enjoyed it.
