Fight of Fancy
Now I feel better!22 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Well, I'm glad you got it out of your system to write out your wrath in verse instead of a real physical combat. Enjoyed the fun lines and the humorous solution (of the verses not the violence).
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Lol. Well, I'm glad you got it out of your system to write out your wrath in verse instead of a real physical combat. Enjoyed the fun lines and the humorous solution (of the verses not the violence).
Comment Written 13-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Thanks. It was a fun write. If you saw me, you'd really laugh. I'm not interested in real violence, but if I tried it I'd be the one getting thrashed. LOL Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Cindy, amusing poem with good use of mono-rhyme used throughout. Good internal rhyme in - 'I threw him in the hay and left him where he lay.' Unusual picture in your layout. Enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Hi Cindy, amusing poem with good use of mono-rhyme used throughout. Good internal rhyme in - 'I threw him in the hay and left him where he lay.' Unusual picture in your layout. Enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Thanks. Of course I don't really think vilonce is the answer, but this was a fun write and great therapy. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from F Scott Hafner
Nice description of handling someone - In these times you can't even think of touching someone. Too many lawyers out there looking for work. It is fun to live in your poem. All of us at times wanted to treat someone ill just because they deserved it. But I'm sure I motivated many who wanted to throttle me for one reason or another. Your poem helps keep me on my best behavior. I don't intentionally piss anyone off - but it like bull in a china shop. Excessive care means nothing.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Nice description of handling someone - In these times you can't even think of touching someone. Too many lawyers out there looking for work. It is fun to live in your poem. All of us at times wanted to treat someone ill just because they deserved it. But I'm sure I motivated many who wanted to throttle me for one reason or another. Your poem helps keep me on my best behavior. I don't intentionally piss anyone off - but it like bull in a china shop. Excessive care means nothing.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Thanks. Of course, if I tried to throttle someone for real, I'd end up getting hurt myself. I'm just not that tough. This poem was great therapy. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Eternal Muse
It's important to get things off our system. Bottling is not healthy. I am glad you shared this with us. Admired your rhymes and meter. You chose an appropriate red font to bring out the raging emotions inside you. Glad you didn't throttle the guy! (lol).
This just rolls off the tongue:
One afternoon damp and hazy
I met a man a little crazy.
He offered me a yellow daisy
And told me not to be so lazy.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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It's important to get things off our system. Bottling is not healthy. I am glad you shared this with us. Admired your rhymes and meter. You chose an appropriate red font to bring out the raging emotions inside you. Glad you didn't throttle the guy! (lol).
This just rolls off the tongue:
One afternoon damp and hazy
I met a man a little crazy.
He offered me a yellow daisy
And told me not to be so lazy.
Excellent.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Thanks. Of course I wouldn't (not to mention couldn't) really throttle someone. This was great therapy. Glad you liked it.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem/story. It is an effective way to get rid of anger by writing about it instead of really hurting someone physically of mentally. G
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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A very well-written poem/story. It is an effective way to get rid of anger by writing about it instead of really hurting someone physically of mentally. G
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Thanks. It's the best way to get rid of anger. If I tried to whomp someone in the real world, I'd be in big trouble. I'd be the one in a world of hurt. Not that I really want to hurt anyone anyhow.
Comment from ronnie k
LOL, well for sure if a beating you wanted to give, this is it, it is so good that our craft of poetry is available are you and many more of us (smile) great whipping by the way.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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LOL, well for sure if a beating you wanted to give, this is it, it is so good that our craft of poetry is available are you and many more of us (smile) great whipping by the way.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Yep, it's a good thing. If I tried to give someone a beating in real life, I'd be the one in a world of hurt. I'm just not tough enough. LOL Glad you liked my poem.
Comment from Artasylum
Well A+ on the the rhyme... Remind me not to make you mad or I might end up good and dead. This was fun and sing song musically. Fun read. Yours, diana
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Well A+ on the the rhyme... Remind me not to make you mad or I might end up good and dead. This was fun and sing song musically. Fun read. Yours, diana
Comment Written 23-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Haha, I don't think you have much to worry about. I'm really not that tough. You'd probably beat me. LOL Glad you enjoyed the poem.
Comment from Bridget Myer
Rhyming is such a skill.
I totally admire any writer, poet who can incorporate this form of creating into their sharing.
As a new writer, to read this structured piece should help implant within my skill set and hopefully give me confidence to explore this sort of writing and give it a go
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Rhyming is such a skill.
I totally admire any writer, poet who can incorporate this form of creating into their sharing.
As a new writer, to read this structured piece should help implant within my skill set and hopefully give me confidence to explore this sort of writing and give it a go
Comment Written 23-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Thanks. You really should give it a go. Once you get started it really isn't that hard. Best of luck with your writing.
Comment from RGstar
I don't usually laugh at limericks or most humorous poems, unless of course, they find the right spot. This did. I was summing up characters whilst seeing the scene played out in front of me, then smiling and smiling.
Nicely done.
RGstar
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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I don't usually laugh at limericks or most humorous poems, unless of course, they find the right spot. This did. I was summing up characters whilst seeing the scene played out in front of me, then smiling and smiling.
Nicely done.
RGstar
Comment Written 23-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Thanks. I'm glad I could make you laugh.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Fight of Fancy", is a well-written and entertaining piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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"Fight of Fancy", is a well-written and entertaining piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.
