Hide and Seek
Playing hide and seek41 total reviews
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
lol, This is such a cute 5-7-5, my friend. It's so funny but true, kids and pets both hide in plain sight thinking no ones the wiser, lol Good luck, ~Kerry
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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lol, This is such a cute 5-7-5, my friend. It's so funny but true, kids and pets both hide in plain sight thinking no ones the wiser, lol Good luck, ~Kerry
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Kerry for your thoughtful review and excellent rating
I just love that photo. It makes me laugh every time I see it
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It's really cute! Enjoy your day!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry writing prompt.
Your cute verse is well matched by the very cute picture.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry writing prompt.
Your cute verse is well matched by the very cute picture.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Sharon for your lovely review and excellent rating
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is a wonderful and thought provoking poem. The message is clear and resonates through these few lines. We do indeed engage in this activity instead of being transparent. Great job Pam and well done.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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This is a wonderful and thought provoking poem. The message is clear and resonates through these few lines. We do indeed engage in this activity instead of being transparent. Great job Pam and well done.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Hi, Jeffrey. If we were totallytransparrnt we would hurt a lot of people. Oh that is an ugly dress
We pretend we like the dress. Thanking
You for your lovely review and five star rating
Comment from RGstar
Love the image, and even more what your writing portrays.
A great post, even if small.
Much strength, depth, furthermost, joy and sense.
Have a great day.
RGstar
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Love the image, and even more what your writing portrays.
A great post, even if small.
Much strength, depth, furthermost, joy and sense.
Have a great day.
RGstar
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Thank you, RGstar for your thoughtful review and five star rating
Comment from F Scott Hafner
Very nice poem. Clever contrasting children and adults. Yes in deed, adults hide their minds but that is necessary as stepping beyond politically correct norms can be catastrophic. We have a president who gets away with it every day. Not so the rest of us. Again- very nice!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Very nice poem. Clever contrasting children and adults. Yes in deed, adults hide their minds but that is necessary as stepping beyond politically correct norms can be catastrophic. We have a president who gets away with it every day. Not so the rest of us. Again- very nice!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Wow. Thank you Frank for one of your precious six star ratings. I so appreciate it. Thank you for your thoughtful review
I agree totally. In fact, we teach children to hide certain thoughts so as not to hurt the feelings of others. Suppressing those thoughts are good
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Hide and Seek", short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's thought-provoking piece was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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"Hide and Seek", short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's thought-provoking piece was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Thank you, duchessofdrumb for your thoughtful review and excellent rating
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Pamusart, as always, you're more than welcome.
Take care, best wishes and God bless you,
the Duchess
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO PAMUSART: Reading your poem here really stimulates my inspiration to reply to it.
All of us grownups were, "once upon a time," children. So true. Back then we thought that if we cannot see you, then you cannot see us. So we hid our bodies. But, my, my, my; I've imagined that the same misconception grows up with us. And as we age the misconception grows up with us, and develops into error. Then error develops into self denial, thus we hide our minds. And guess what, Pamusart. We never out grow our childhood misconception. YES. We now think that because we cannot see people, people cannot see us. So we move the pillow down and cover our ( bottoms.) But now...what about..."Yooo-Hooo. I.C.U. Just my thoughts, Pam. rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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HELLO PAMUSART: Reading your poem here really stimulates my inspiration to reply to it.
All of us grownups were, "once upon a time," children. So true. Back then we thought that if we cannot see you, then you cannot see us. So we hid our bodies. But, my, my, my; I've imagined that the same misconception grows up with us. And as we age the misconception grows up with us, and develops into error. Then error develops into self denial, thus we hide our minds. And guess what, Pamusart. We never out grow our childhood misconception. YES. We now think that because we cannot see people, people cannot see us. So we move the pillow down and cover our ( bottoms.) But now...what about..."Yooo-Hooo. I.C.U. Just my thoughts, Pam. rhonnie69.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Quite weighty thoughts as well. People do give telltale signs sometimes. Thank you for your lovely review and five star rating
Comment from Gloria ....
This is wonderful Pam. The photo a perfect pairing with a good social commentary, even though at this stage in history we have to be a little careful about showing our minds. ;-)
And yes, the photo is so cute.
Great job and best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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This is wonderful Pam. The photo a perfect pairing with a good social commentary, even though at this stage in history we have to be a little careful about showing our minds. ;-)
And yes, the photo is so cute.
Great job and best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Gloria for your thoughtful review and five star rating looks like Rod Rosenteim is an American hero and so is Michael Avanatti
Comment from pome lover
well, that's the cutest picture I've seen in a while. It does make you laugh.
your poem makes a good point. I wonder, though, if some adults are seen through as easily. At any rate you picked a winner for an accompaning picture.
OR - you may be referring to shy folk who keep their thoughts to themselves due to being self conscious or unsure of themselves. All kinds of reasons, I guess, for hiding your mind. good job.
Katharine - pome lover
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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well, that's the cutest picture I've seen in a while. It does make you laugh.
your poem makes a good point. I wonder, though, if some adults are seen through as easily. At any rate you picked a winner for an accompaning picture.
OR - you may be referring to shy folk who keep their thoughts to themselves due to being self conscious or unsure of themselves. All kinds of reasons, I guess, for hiding your mind. good job.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Katherine for your lovely review and five star rating
Comment from Janet Foor
I remember the days when my children were young and they thought if they couldn't see me that I couldn't see them. LOL !
This is a sweet little poem with a perfect picture.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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I remember the days when my children were young and they thought if they couldn't see me that I couldn't see them. LOL !
This is a sweet little poem with a perfect picture.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Janet for your lovely review and excellent rating
