On Waves of Deepest Blue...
Cinquain: Second place winner...47 total reviews
Comment from Hitcher
It is in the enjoying of those nights of us that nothing else matters and life is beautiful : ) a very nice use of the cinquain form friend, I enjoyed your words, good luck!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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It is in the enjoying of those nights of us that nothing else matters and life is beautiful : ) a very nice use of the cinquain form friend, I enjoyed your words, good luck!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hello Hitcher!
So pleased that you enjoyed my offering!
Thank you!
And I agree completely with the first part of your first sentence!
Please stop by again!
diane
Comment from F Scott Hafner
Since early childhood I thought it necessary to understand how infinitely small and big related for the world to make sense. Much later in life I found a solution that made sense to me - none others as far as I can tell. But the world makes no more sense to me as before. So your poem seems a very good candidate for getting it right.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Since early childhood I thought it necessary to understand how infinitely small and big related for the world to make sense. Much later in life I found a solution that made sense to me - none others as far as I can tell. But the world makes no more sense to me as before. So your poem seems a very good candidate for getting it right.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Oh, Frank!
I am always pleased when you pay my work a visit!
Thank you for the excellent rating and thoughtful review...
diane
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Ah! This is so nice. A lovely romantic Cinquain, without sounding soppy. 'when all life needed to make sense was us...' How lovely is that? Your lines 1-3 make good use of metaphor. Lovely title and picture. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Ah! This is so nice. A lovely romantic Cinquain, without sounding soppy. 'when all life needed to make sense was us...' How lovely is that? Your lines 1-3 make good use of metaphor. Lovely title and picture. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hello Dorothy,
Thank you so much for your excellent rating and thoughtful review.
Glad to know my words resonated with you!
diane
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Awe... This is such a sweet Cinquain poem, my friend, I love it, truly lovely.
A great entry for the contest, I wish you luck! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Awe... This is such a sweet Cinquain poem, my friend, I love it, truly lovely.
A great entry for the contest, I wish you luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hello Kerry!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
diane
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My pleasure.
Comment from Swampfox1
This is a good entry into the Cinquain Poetry contest. I like the way it reads, I like the last line, this shows serious thought and dedication and hard work. Great job, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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This is a good entry into the Cinquain Poetry contest. I like the way it reads, I like the last line, this shows serious thought and dedication and hard work. Great job, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hello!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
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you're welcome
Comment from Harry Smith
This is a beautifully written poem with a beautiful picture to compliment it. The poem is full of both emotions and imagery.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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This is a beautifully written poem with a beautiful picture to compliment it. The poem is full of both emotions and imagery.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hello Harry!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
First of all the artwork gets a 6 all by itself. It is so beautiful and serene, But the poem is very detailed and romantic as well. I wish you much success in the contest. And the part when it you wrote that the cherished night and that the only thing that life was missing was the two of you. Very romantic
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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First of all the artwork gets a 6 all by itself. It is so beautiful and serene, But the poem is very detailed and romantic as well. I wish you much success in the contest. And the part when it you wrote that the cherished night and that the only thing that life was missing was the two of you. Very romantic
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hello Mary!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review.
The artwork looks like a scene from where my husband and I live in northern Michigan = truly beautiful...
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A beautiful and serene write filled with tranquility, togetherness and love. A romantic picture with memorable words and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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A beautiful and serene write filled with tranquility, togetherness and love. A romantic picture with memorable words and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hello Dolly!
So pleased you enjoy!
The photograph looks like a scene taken from where my husband and I live in northern Michigan! (And my British son-in-law shared with me this past weekend that he has visited your beautiful Tenerife!)
Thank you again!
dian
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a lovely romantic poem. I especially liked the emphasis at the end of just the two of you. It flowed well and the photograph was a good choice for this one. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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This is a lovely romantic poem. I especially liked the emphasis at the end of just the two of you. It flowed well and the photograph was a good choice for this one. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hello Friend,
So pleased you enjoyed.
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Zue65
I enjoyed reading this cute lovely poem. I made me feel so cheesy. I liked the fact that it is quite short and short poem really excite me. Thanks for sharing your talent to us, the readers. Very well done.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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I enjoyed reading this cute lovely poem. I made me feel so cheesy. I liked the fact that it is quite short and short poem really excite me. Thanks for sharing your talent to us, the readers. Very well done.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hello Susan!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
