Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Awe,Sandra, what has happened to Mildred? Yes, it is a heart attack, but it doesn't seem right. I can't wait for the result of the tests. Oh, I so hope she will be alright.
Just a couple of things:
I guess it's due to his job. If he couldn't, he'd never cope with what he has to see and do every day.= I guess it was due to his job. If he couldn't he'd never cope with what he had to see and do every day.
I smiled at the memory, and saw James was thinking the same thing. That was the day James offered her his kitchen steps to stop her having a similar accident in the future... which he didn't have. I'm not sure about this sentence.
Do you mean she never had an accident in the future, or did James not have any steps hence he went buying some? Love the story as you know. A big hug. Ullaxxxx

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

Thank you so much for the six stars, Ulla!! James had to go out and buy the steps, it was an excuse to come and see them again. This was in the first book when James was trying to get a date with Veronica. It worked as you know! lol. Thanks for finding the errant comma. We will see what's wrong with Mildred in the next part. :)) Thanks, my friend. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from aryr

Excellent

A rather good chapter of explanation, Sandra, or at least a start. Poor Mildred, a heart attack, but not finding a reason is annoying to James and Veronica. Mildred may be old but she is definitely an important member of the family. This had a great reading flow and an amazing plot line. Thanks so much for sharing, I eagerly await the next chapter. Very well done. Big hugs and smiles.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

Thank you so much, Alie, for your lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed this part. We might find out more next time! Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

reply by aryr on 22-Apr-2018

You are always welcome Sandra, it is a great story. Hugs and smiles.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

She absolutely has to be all right. That's all there is to it. I won't stand for anything else. LOL Love the the story and I never expected this to happen.

Kneeling down on the opposite side to me, he put his fingers on the pulse in her neck and then lifted each of her eyelids. (kneeling implies down, down isn't needed)

Having almost convinced myself, I went back down the stairs to wait. (you don't need 'the')

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

Thank you so very much for this lovely review, Barbara, and all the lovely stars. I think I'm going to be getting 'hate mail' soon! LOL! Thank you, my friend, it's reviews like yours that keep the story going. Big hugs. Sandra xxx

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Worrying times for the folks here with Mildred's mystery affliction. maybe a higher power is meddling...

it might something simple like a very low blood sugar count - might be something.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

How did I do that!!! Thank you so much, Gareth, for another helpful review. You never know what's going on in the minds of the Power's that be. :)) They will be featuring again soon. Thanks, my friend. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from apky

Exceptional

Veronica's so worried about Mildred, and that makes me worried. You've made me fall in love with these characters of yours far too much, LOL!

Another brilliant and moving piece of writing that deserves a straight six.

Here's a little something to correct below:

Try not to worry, it might (be) something simple like a very low blood sugar count

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

#Thank you so very much for the 6 lovely stars, Aki, and for finding that missing 'be'. I must have read that so many times yet never spotted it. I'm really pleased you like my characters, I'm already talking about them as if they are real! lol. Thanks my friend. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I'm just wondering ir, in fact Mildred herself went back in time to Joe and Rosie's time, and she's cleverly sorted something, although James says she was normal, none of the normal things, then why did she go missing. Your story is excellent dear Sandra. A couple of years you were a poet, there's hope for the rest of us, well done. Blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

You certainly have given this one some thought, Roy! lol. I love your review. Yes, poetry will always be my first love, and I hope to be finding time to write some more soon. Thank you so much, my dear friend, for your wonderful review. Big hugs, :)) Sandra xxx

reply by royowen on 22-Apr-2018

Always a pleasure Sandra,

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks the story so catchy since the beginning, fantastic free flow of thoughts, live taletelling, influencing climax, happy ending; we worry the same way; things happen in its own unexpected ways; yes doubtlessly she will be alright; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

Thank you so much, Dr Alcreator, for another lovely review. I'm delighted you are still enjoying my story. Big hugs! Sandra xxx

Comment from JDRBAR

Excellent

before bringing my legs up and tried to relax. ( and trying to relax)(agreement)
"Sweetheart, listen to me carefully, (period, new sentence) Mildred has had a heart-attack.
The relief I felt was only overshadowed by the fear of it happening again. (of what happening again?)
I really need to go back and read your first book LOL.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

Thank you so much for finding those errors! I've made the corrections now. This one is nearly finished now, and then I'll be starting the final book in the trilogy ... after a break. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from Larissa B

Excellent

This looks like an interesting story. Too far on your chaps for me to say going back to catch up. But per this chapter alone, I can see it is a well- thought out plot with lots of challenge as it is about travelling through time. Hmmm.... congratulations on all the other chaps you've managed to write so far. And for the rest, best wishes.

Larissa

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 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

Thank you, Larissa, for stopping by to read this part. Yes, it's almost at the end now, and is the second book in the trilogy. The first was published last November. One more to write. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Hello, Sandra, :)

Good chapter. I'm wondering what is wrong too -- wonder if you know yet? Sometimes when I write I have no idea what will happen, it just comes out.

Take care,
Nome

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 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

Oh, yes, I know. James told me first. LOL. Thank you, Nome, for reading this part. Big hugs. Sandra xx