The Unhappiest Day of Her Life
Flash Fiction Contest Entry3 total reviews
Comment from Beck Fenton
Poor Feef! Happy Bootsy!
You make a good case for not mixing birds and cats, no matter how well you treat them they will always be adversaries.
I like the way you tied in the prompt with the canary getting lost (on purpose, I suppose). Good luck.
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Poor Feef! Happy Bootsy!
You make a good case for not mixing birds and cats, no matter how well you treat them they will always be adversaries.
I like the way you tied in the prompt with the canary getting lost (on purpose, I suppose). Good luck.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Lost Flash Fiction' writing prompt.
Your short story is well told with detail and a good ending. Tjough not for Feef.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Lost Flash Fiction' writing prompt.
Your short story is well told with detail and a good ending. Tjough not for Feef.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
Comment from giraffmang
Ah, the world is a perilous place, especially when competing species occupy the same space. lol
nice piece.
"Not the basement, reasoned Rog - need closing speech marks after the comma.
i went on with the search - I.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Ah, the world is a perilous place, especially when competing species occupy the same space. lol
nice piece.
"Not the basement, reasoned Rog - need closing speech marks after the comma.
i went on with the search - I.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Thank you, GM, for your perspicacity and alertness for careless mistakes!
