Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Excellent

I'm sure that the reason that Timmy has a secret of his abandonment is because he has vowed to himself to never tell anyone what led to his decision. Perhaps a nasty fall, a dog might have chased him or he may have almost gotten hit by a car. What ever the reason maybe for the past3 years he hasn't told anyone. Then he may never reveal his secret of his abandonment. Nice short simple story which leaves me to wonder though what caused Timmy to park his bike. Hmmmmmmmmmmmm

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018

Thank you. Don't know yet what happened to Timmy just that it was something he wants to forget. I have to let it brew and see where it takes me.

reply by Mary Hollingsworth on 18-Apr-2018

ok, Ill be waiting. Short and sweet

Comment from Harry Smith

Excellent

Exceptionally well written is the short story that has lots of imagery and emotions as well. The picture selection complimented the story. Great job.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018

Thank you for thinking my story is well written.

Comment from N. Rabwar

Excellent

I felt it was very well written. I was thoroughly engaged as a reader, but I was a little bit dissatisfied. Somehow I wanted more plot or more answers. That might be unfair due to the constraint of only 50 words. Other than that I thought it was great.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018

Thank you so much. I think getting character, plot and setting with a beginning, middle and end are fun to do in just 50 words.
Will have to keep thinking about this story to see where its headed.