The Beggar
We have all seen this person sitting on the corner.12 total reviews
Comment from nartoonla
That was very touching for a fictional story and well written with a message for all. God is there it is us that must look for his signs which are there to guide and comfort us in times of need. Well done!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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That was very touching for a fictional story and well written with a message for all. God is there it is us that must look for his signs which are there to guide and comfort us in times of need. Well done!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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I've have been amazed at the comments this little story has received. Many thanks for the kind words ad awesome review. I'll be by to read one day soon.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Rasmine
Hello, Mike,
Yeah, it is amazing. Thank you, for sharing this. You never know who anyone is, no one should judge.
I found one typo:
His black, Army, baseball cap covers his eyes (how about 'A black Army baseball cap covered his eyes.'.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Hello, Mike,
Yeah, it is amazing. Thank you, for sharing this. You never know who anyone is, no one should judge.
I found one typo:
His black, Army, baseball cap covers his eyes (how about 'A black Army baseball cap covered his eyes.'.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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The comments about this little story have been amazing, including yours. I'm so blessed and thankful. I'll be by to read, one day soon.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Harry Smith
Exceptional picture that is perfect for this short story that is exceptionally well written with plenty of both imagery and emotions. The reader found this story easy to read and understand which made it a pleasure.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Exceptional picture that is perfect for this short story that is exceptionally well written with plenty of both imagery and emotions. The reader found this story easy to read and understand which made it a pleasure.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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The comments about this little story have been amazing, including yours. I'm so blessed and thankful. I'll be by to read one day soon.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This is a well-written piece, in spite of the telegraphing of the end. There are countless tales of just such occurances when people 'pay attention'.
Good stuff
G
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Hi there,
This is a well-written piece, in spite of the telegraphing of the end. There are countless tales of just such occurances when people 'pay attention'.
Good stuff
G
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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The comments about this little story have been amazing, including yours. I'm so blessed and thankful. I'll be by to read one day soon.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from nancy_e_davis
You never know. It is always a possibility. Sometimes angels appear to be people and then disappear. We are tested in many ways. I have heard stories of angels helping people and then just disappearing. That's the sort of Ghost story I like.HAHAHA. Thank you Mike. I love the story. Nancy
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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You never know. It is always a possibility. Sometimes angels appear to be people and then disappear. We are tested in many ways. I have heard stories of angels helping people and then just disappearing. That's the sort of Ghost story I like.HAHAHA. Thank you Mike. I love the story. Nancy
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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The comments about this little story have been amazing, including yours. I'm so blessed and thankful. I'll be by to read one day soon.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Your well told short story has a clear and strong message.
Well written, and well done.
Thank you for sharing this lovely piece with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Your well told short story has a clear and strong message.
Well written, and well done.
Thank you for sharing this lovely piece with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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The comments about this little story have been amazing, including yours. I'm so blessed and thankful. I'll be by to read one day soon.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from karenina
I believe. God works in wondrous ways....seems you needed the message and your soul was begginf for spiritual affirmation! Your poetic inspiration had brought life to my life this dark night....
Karenina
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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I believe. God works in wondrous ways....seems you needed the message and your soul was begginf for spiritual affirmation! Your poetic inspiration had brought life to my life this dark night....
Karenina
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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The comments about this little story have been amazing, including yours. I'm so blessed and thankful.I'll be by to read one day soon.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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Alone we can do so little; together we can do so much.
Helen Keller
Comment from Teri7
Mike, This really touched me as I read it. It always amazes me how the Lord works and who He uses. To think He would use me for anything blows my mind every day. I am so thankful that He loves us enough and blesses us as we reach out to help others! May God bless you my friend always! And Wanda too! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Mike, This really touched me as I read it. It always amazes me how the Lord works and who He uses. To think He would use me for anything blows my mind every day. I am so thankful that He loves us enough and blesses us as we reach out to help others! May God bless you my friend always! And Wanda too! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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The reviews about this little story have been amazing, including yours. I'm so blessed and thankful for all of your support! I'll be by to read one day soon.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Liberty Justice
What a wonderful writing and revelation filled with caring. One never knows who one might meet. I bet the giver received many splendid blessings for helping the beggar. Such a spiritual write. Truly, Liberty justice
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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What a wonderful writing and revelation filled with caring. One never knows who one might meet. I bet the giver received many splendid blessings for helping the beggar. Such a spiritual write. Truly, Liberty justice
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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The comments about this little story have been amazing, including yours. I'm so blessed and thankful! I'll be by to read one day soon.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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Comment from Sherman541
WOW what a fantastic story. I would have to agree, strange that he would have a sign stating that God had forgotten him. Wonderful that you went to him to help him out and inform him that God is with us always. My thanks to you for sharing this story and for you being a good Samaritan. Sherman
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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WOW what a fantastic story. I would have to agree, strange that he would have a sign stating that God had forgotten him. Wonderful that you went to him to help him out and inform him that God is with us always. My thanks to you for sharing this story and for you being a good Samaritan. Sherman
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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The comments about this little story have been amazing, including yours. I'm so blessed and thankful! I'll be by to read one day soon.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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You are so very welcome and this does deserve many wonderful comments, as it truly is a wonderful story.
