Too Close For Comfort
I'm not complaining. I'm used to this.8 total reviews
Comment from Harry Smith
This is an outstanding 5-7-5 poem that is full of imagery. The picture selection really complimented the poem. Good luck with the contest.
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This is an outstanding 5-7-5 poem that is full of imagery. The picture selection really complimented the poem. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Very cute little birdies. I love the pictures of the little birdies and what makes it so humorous is the picture and the word combination. I hope they all had their underarm deodorant on LOL thank you writer very cute jester for a theme of togetherness LOL
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Very cute little birdies. I love the pictures of the little birdies and what makes it so humorous is the picture and the word combination. I hope they all had their underarm deodorant on LOL thank you writer very cute jester for a theme of togetherness LOL
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Your short verse tells a truth. The birds do look like they may be on a bus or subway.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Your short verse tells a truth. The birds do look like they may be on a bus or subway.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is such a cute write, perfect words for a perfect picture that made me smile, nature has its moments and this is one of them, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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This is such a cute write, perfect words for a perfect picture that made me smile, nature has its moments and this is one of them, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
Comment from meeshu
a poem describing this picture. and it fits the 5-7-5 prescription. I am not quite sure I really get it. the fifth star is just for that. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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a poem describing this picture. and it fits the 5-7-5 prescription. I am not quite sure I really get it. the fifth star is just for that. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Thanks, Meeshu. You already provided good luck, by not withholding that fifth star. The cat ate the canary. Get it?
Comment from karenina
See? Smart poets choose adorable photos and pithy lityle anecdotes for this form! It so feels like a sure fire winner to me!
Clever write....goid luck!
Karenina
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See? Smart poets choose adorable photos and pithy lityle anecdotes for this form! It so feels like a sure fire winner to me!
Clever write....goid luck!
Karenina
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
Comment from Liz O'Neill
What an appropo picture you have chosen. It is so expressive. The expressions are great, especially the middle one who I think is the loudest complainer. The alliteration of the s's and b's is a nice touch effecting disgust, almost hissing. I love the simple solution...a bus. This a very amusing poem. Great work.
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What an appropo picture you have chosen. It is so expressive. The expressions are great, especially the middle one who I think is the loudest complainer. The alliteration of the s's and b's is a nice touch effecting disgust, almost hissing. I love the simple solution...a bus. This a very amusing poem. Great work.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
Comment from Pamusart
This is a good entry for the contest. Man is probably the only animal who would be unable to survive without shelter. That is why man has hands, I suppose. To build shelter. We got very good at it. I am not sure if any wild animal has permanent shelter. Nice photo. Nice poem. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
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This is a good entry for the contest. Man is probably the only animal who would be unable to survive without shelter. That is why man has hands, I suppose. To build shelter. We got very good at it. I am not sure if any wild animal has permanent shelter. Nice photo. Nice poem. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
