A Double Rainbow in New York
A sonnet in mainly iambic tetrameter45 total reviews
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Great picture. Rainbows are always beautiful and a double rainbow is always exciting to see. It does always seem to raise one spirits when you see one and such a cute rainbow would always bring much joy.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Great picture. Rainbows are always beautiful and a double rainbow is always exciting to see. It does always seem to raise one spirits when you see one and such a cute rainbow would always bring much joy.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Many thanks, Roxanne. I appreciate your supportive comments. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from persevere
This is a brilliant sonnet. I love the double rainbow portrayed by the brollies of 7 colours and the granddaughter representing the proverbial pot of gold. The contrast of the brownstone buildings and morbid skies with the pot of gold is vivid.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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This is a brilliant sonnet. I love the double rainbow portrayed by the brollies of 7 colours and the granddaughter representing the proverbial pot of gold. The contrast of the brownstone buildings and morbid skies with the pot of gold is vivid.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Many thanks for the sixth star, Persevere. I appreciate your supportive comments about the contrasts in my poem. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from His Grayness
I found this to be a really excellent work of certainly, somewhat complex poetic style. It is beautifully presented in excellent photography and the writing comes across perfectly in excellent coloration, rhyme, and pace. Overall, a delightful work in all dimensions! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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I found this to be a really excellent work of certainly, somewhat complex poetic style. It is beautifully presented in excellent photography and the writing comes across perfectly in excellent coloration, rhyme, and pace. Overall, a delightful work in all dimensions! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Many thanks for your six star award, Vance. As always, I appreciate your very supportive comments. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from jenintorre
Hi Tony
This is a lovely poem about a double rainbow, what a fabulous thought. Great artwork and presentation. Excellent rhyme.Very enjoyable.
Best wishes Jen.
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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Hi Tony
This is a lovely poem about a double rainbow, what a fabulous thought. Great artwork and presentation. Excellent rhyme.Very enjoyable.
Best wishes Jen.
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Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Many thanks, Jenin. I appreciate your supportive comments. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from estory
A nice sonnet in an uplifting tone that captures this moment of coming out from behind the clouds, the hope of the rainbow is a strong image. I think the sonnet was well crafted, nice musical elements, good images, and great rhythm. estory
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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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A nice sonnet in an uplifting tone that captures this moment of coming out from behind the clouds, the hope of the rainbow is a strong image. I think the sonnet was well crafted, nice musical elements, good images, and great rhythm. estory
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Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Very many thanks for your review, estory, and for your remarks about the atmospherics of this one. Best wishes, Tony
