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Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Acrostic Poetry' writing prompt.
Your verse is lovely. Happy anniversary.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
    Hi Sharon Thank you for your review but it is not in any contest except the NaPoWriPo Chellenge I dont think I can enter this into a contest as well bit appreciate ypur good luck wishes Cheers Christine
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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Awe, that's so sweet, loving, and very romantic. I like the emotions and feelings projected and conveyed in this well written poem. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing this with us. Well done Chrissy!

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
    Hi Jeffrey Thank you for a lovely review I am a lucky lady a good man beside me Cheers Christine
Comment from royowen
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Congratulations Christine, Elaine and I have been affectively married since 1971, so slightly longer, but it's a real achievement, and a victory and ode to endurance, (although being married to nice person makes it easy) well done, a beautully scribed acrostic poem, my friend, you can be very proud of yourselves, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
    Hi Roy, Thank you very much and yes it is a long time and al good marriages take work and commitment getting through the good and bad times but coming out the end with satisfaction and love. I think I will keep him LOL . I quite like acrostics and this wrote Itself and well done to you and Elaine too. Cheers Christine
Comment from lyenochka
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Happy 44th Anniversary! Seems like you kept you love fresh and ever growing. What a brave beginning to go off and get married without your parents' knowing. You knew it was the right choice. Blessings to you both!

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
    Hi Lyenochka, Yes wecwere toung and head strong but is has lasted the distance and we are very lucky to have great families. We were only together for 9 months when we got married a bit of a rebel I was LOL still am really Ha Ha Cheers Christine
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Christine. Congratulations on your wedding anniversary. I enjoyed reading your acrostic and author's note. I hope you have a lovely anniversary dinner. Marilyn

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
    Hi Marilyn, Thank you for your review and our wedding was different and makes a good story. I tried to add a picture of our outfits but it wouldnt take to my poem so I thought a description might be worth it. We did have a lovely dinner Thanks onward and upward gee 45 next year. Cheers Christine
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written acrostic about your forty fourth anniversary. Congratulations if this accomplishment that is only possible where true love is shared between two lovers.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
    Hi Sandra, Thank you for your review and we are not a bad team and have mjch to be thankful for Cheers Christine
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hi Chrissy, first I send my congratulations and wish you all the best on your 44th wedding anniversary. Like you I have a daughter Catherine and two sons Martin and Bill, and seven grandchildren. I love your acrostic but your author notes I like even more. Great story - and lots more happy years. Warm regards Dorothy xxx

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
    Hi Dorothy, Thank you on both accounts fro you congrats and review, Ha Ha yes it is a true stroy I never was one for fancy wedding dresses etc and lived in jeans and windsheaters and dessert boots so I always said I would get married in them LOL My daughter Katie had the big wedding and lovely dress and 200 plus guests so she made up for it Ha Ha. I wanted to put a pic of us on this but I couldnt get my image to attach however maybe one day Iwill send a photo through. Cheers Christinex
Comment from Susan B. Lamphier
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Christine--Happy anniversary! This was an excellent tribute to your years of marriage. I loved the story of your elopement, and I could just see you in your flared jeans and colored jackets. What a hoot! Congratulations! And well done!

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
    Hi Susan Thank you and yes we were a matching couple Ha Ha, My daughter made up for it she had a big wedding but I do not regret my wedding one bit it was easy to arrange LOL and makes a great story. so 44 years later I guess we have done alright. Cheers Christine
Comment from Mark Valentine
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Happy Anniversary! I love the elopement story. Not much better in life than a marriage and family life that lasts. Your poem extols that gift wonderfully. Enjoy your romantic dinner tonight!

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
    Hi Mark, Thank you and yes it caused a little stir but both families got over it Ha Ha. I am a bit of a rebel when it comes to 'rules' and yes we did enjoy a lovely meal last night. Thanks for your review . Cheers Christine
Comment from aryr
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First- Happy Anniversary Christine & Greg. This was so enjoyable to read and you managed a fantastic rhyme pattern. You covered the beauty of the years rather well. I really enjoyed your notations. Sometimes simple is the most beautiful and most memorable. Thank you so much for creating this and sharing a special day.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
    Hi Ary, Thank you for your review and I am pleased you enjoyed my poem and notes I though I would clarify some points and we did have fun getting married like that amd still together not a bad effort Cheers Christine
reply by aryr on 17-Apr-2018
    You are so welcome Christine.