Tear-drops
Necessary tears16 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about tear drops were most beguiling waxed with laughter over a silly comedy but were least beguiling hiding from necessity; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks about tear drops were most beguiling waxed with laughter over a silly comedy but were least beguiling hiding from necessity; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 16-Apr-2018
Comment from karenina
My first thought? This should be published. It is emotive, real, unexpectedly honest, true, a voice that needs to be heard.... It is well written, well themed, well NOT rhymed... (Perfectly free, free verse)---- It is a vision of life with the scab ripped off. It is perfect. If I had a six you would have it....
Karenina
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My first thought? This should be published. It is emotive, real, unexpectedly honest, true, a voice that needs to be heard.... It is well written, well themed, well NOT rhymed... (Perfectly free, free verse)---- It is a vision of life with the scab ripped off. It is perfect. If I had a six you would have it....
Karenina
Comment Written 16-Apr-2018
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, and you write with flair, I thought this most beguiling, just as you found the tears. Great word choices and imagery and I really think your statement at the end puts the icing on the cake. Very thoughtful comment. I noticed no errors, and thanks for sharing the poem with me today, Ana.
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Hello, and you write with flair, I thought this most beguiling, just as you found the tears. Great word choices and imagery and I really think your statement at the end puts the icing on the cake. Very thoughtful comment. I noticed no errors, and thanks for sharing the poem with me today, Ana.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2018
Comment from Harry Smith
Excellent picture selection for a poem that is excellently well written with lots and lots of imagery. the reader really enjoyed the read.
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Excellent picture selection for a poem that is excellently well written with lots and lots of imagery. the reader really enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2018
Comment from meeshu
nicely done Sgt. an extremely complex form that looks so simple. original and
and effective style with interesting content. a great read. I enjoyed it.........meeshu
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nicely done Sgt. an extremely complex form that looks so simple. original and
and effective style with interesting content. a great read. I enjoyed it.........meeshu
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2018
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
This is so beautiful. Showing all the things that can bring someone to tears. Sometimes when we least expect the tears to come. I loved the narration throughout and description of day-to-day life/strife. Well-written.
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This is so beautiful. Showing all the things that can bring someone to tears. Sometimes when we least expect the tears to come. I loved the narration throughout and description of day-to-day life/strife. Well-written.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2018
