Queensland Coast
The beauty and tenacity of a Queensland coast.11 total reviews
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Sugarray, I am behind in my reviewing...apologies.
I really like this ABC poetry contest entry. Not only does it describe the way a coastal land breathes in tidal flow with a beautiful picture to enhance but shows how Queensland is known for its breathtaking coastline. The Commonwealth Games certainly highlighted it. Do you live in Qld?
An most enjoyable read. Good luck in the competition. ~DD
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Sugarray, I am behind in my reviewing...apologies.
I really like this ABC poetry contest entry. Not only does it describe the way a coastal land breathes in tidal flow with a beautiful picture to enhance but shows how Queensland is known for its breathtaking coastline. The Commonwealth Games certainly highlighted it. Do you live in Qld?
An most enjoyable read. Good luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Hey DD
No, I live in the states, but I did some research on Queensland and was inspired!! Thanks for the great review. Melissa
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Great Job. Love the picture. I love the ocean, used to live just a 1/4 mile from it, I could see it from the top floor where I worked in CA until the built us building which was a bummer. I hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Great Job. Love the picture. I love the ocean, used to live just a 1/4 mile from it, I could see it from the top floor where I worked in CA until the built us building which was a bummer. I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from sunnilicious
Great overall presentation with artwork and poem. I thought ABC's were like ABCDZ, but you worked it together in a nice flow. Was that meant to be irony? Lolz. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Great overall presentation with artwork and poem. I thought ABC's were like ABCDZ, but you worked it together in a nice flow. Was that meant to be irony? Lolz. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much for the great comments and review!!
Comment from judiverse
Rather unusual choice of letters (Most people seem to start earlier in the alphabet) but this is lovely. you describe the shores of Queensland, and use excellent descriptive words such as thunderous, pounding, and shifting, etc. give a vivid picture. It must be home to many species. Beautifully done, and best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Rather unusual choice of letters (Most people seem to start earlier in the alphabet) but this is lovely. you describe the shores of Queensland, and use excellent descriptive words such as thunderous, pounding, and shifting, etc. give a vivid picture. It must be home to many species. Beautifully done, and best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much for the great comments and review!! I appreciate it Judi.
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You're welcome. We may see a touch of spring this week. At last! judi
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You're welcome. judi
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Yeah! I hope you have beautiful weather! We are under a tornado watch til midnight here in Richmond. Melissa
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You're very welcome. Write on! judi
Comment from William Ross
Great write on the abc poem and the thunderous waves pounding the shores. Best of luck on the contest and have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Great write on the abc poem and the thunderous waves pounding the shores. Best of luck on the contest and have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much for the great comments and review!!
Comment from N.K. Wagner
An excellent ABC poem, Sugarray. Your poem tells me the Queensland coast is not a gentle shore. Wild breeds hearty life. Beauty breeds happy life. It must be close to a perfect place. Well written. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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An excellent ABC poem, Sugarray. Your poem tells me the Queensland coast is not a gentle shore. Wild breeds hearty life. Beauty breeds happy life. It must be close to a perfect place. Well written. :) Nancy
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much for the great comments and review!!
Comment from meeshu
excellent example of ABC poetry with wonderful power and imagery. best of luck in the contest and keep up the fine writing..........meeshu
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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excellent example of ABC poetry with wonderful power and imagery. best of luck in the contest and keep up the fine writing..........meeshu
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much for the great comments and review!!
Comment from Ulla
This is an outstanding ABC poem. I've read it several times and each time It reads better. The photo accompanying it is awesome and goes so well with your poem. Only suggestion is if you highligt the first letter in each line to emphasize the ABC. Good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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This is an outstanding ABC poem. I've read it several times and each time It reads better. The photo accompanying it is awesome and goes so well with your poem. Only suggestion is if you highligt the first letter in each line to emphasize the ABC. Good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much for the great comments and review!! I appreciate it Ulla!
Comment from Auto-Manic
sounds like (maybe a play on words) the ebb and flow of life...but as the many write volumes on the subject, it's graceful when someone can write three or four lines and get the same message across...but, everything is different for any one person...that always made me smile.
Anyway.....
AM
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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sounds like (maybe a play on words) the ebb and flow of life...but as the many write volumes on the subject, it's graceful when someone can write three or four lines and get the same message across...but, everything is different for any one person...that always made me smile.
Anyway.....
AM
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thanks for your comments and good review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Pamusart
This is a good entry in the contest. You must live in Australia. Is that near the Great Barrier Reef? So sad that man's actions are destroying the vitals there. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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This is a good entry in the contest. You must live in Australia. Is that near the Great Barrier Reef? So sad that man's actions are destroying the vitals there. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much for your comments and great review. No, I?m American. I was reading about Queensland and thought this would be appropriate.
